Forces of Nature

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"Oh god... oh god... oh god...!" She panted as Lynn took her to a place no other woman had ever taken her. Before she could stop it, her orgasm raged through her body "OH, OH, OH, OH...!" She gasped as Lynn refused to let her move. "I'm CUMING...!" She shouted as her body convulsed.

Lynn's hands and lips never gave up their hold as Cheryl's body contracted in spasm. She held on as she guided Cheryl to the bed, never letting go of her cheeks and clit. She forced Cheryl's open and feasted on the tart nectar flowing out of her lover. She moved her hands around so they could still cup her ass, and have her thumbs hold open her dripping sex. She tool long slurping licks from the bottom and sucked the clit at the top. With every lick, Cheryl's body vibrated into a full body climax.

"OH, OH, OH, I LOVE YOU!" Cheryl screamed at the top of her voice as Lynn took her over the cliff. "OH PLEASE, OH PLEASE...PLEASE... PLEASE.... OHHHH GOD!" Her body rocked and clutched. Every nerve ending sending overloaded signals of pleasure to her over taxed brain. She could take no more.

"PLEASE STOP... I CAN'T... OH GOD...!" She panted and tried to pry Lynn's face from her sex. "No more... no more... I can't take no more." Cheryl shoved with all of her remaining strength to get away from the sweet torture.

Lynn gave her lover one last slurping kiss and pulled away smiling. She wiped her drenched face with her hand, licking her lips clean. "That was better than I ever dreamed." She smiled at Cheryl. "So, are you ready to get me out of my dress?"

"Ugggg...!" She motioned Lynn up with her hands. "As soon as I can move, you are so paying for that." Cheryl said between deep breaths.

"I told you it was better when you love someone." Lynn scooted up, kissing the red swollen nipples on the way. "I love you and that was so worth the wait!" She snuggled into Cheryl's arms and smiled in contentment.

"Where in the world did you learn to do that?" Cheryl asked as her body continued to vibrate.

"Sweetie, I can read... I am a librarian... duh!" She kissed her lover not caring her face was covered in pussy juice. Cheryl wanted to respond, but her body gave out. She sighed and snuggled into the warmth and fell asleep.

Sometime n the middle of the night, something rough crossed her nipple and shocked her awake. Looking around the dark room, she saw Lynn sleeping there still in her wedding dress. She cursed herself for not giving as much as she received, but she never expected what happened. She scooted out of the bed and went potty and cleaned up a little bit.

She walked back to the bed and started unbuttoning the back of Lynn's dress. Halfway through, a sleepy Lynn looked up. "Oh goody... my turn." She helped as much as her sleepy mind could until Cheryl had her naked in the middle of the bed.

"My god, you're so beautiful." Cheryl breathed.

"And all yours." Lynn smiled as the sleep disappeared and the passion built. Lynn gave herself willingly to Cheryl. She gasped and writhed on the bed as her lover reciprocated in their love making. She knew she was getting the bed wet even before Cheryl touched her sex. She tried hard to keep aware enough to give her lover the one thing she could only give once.

She felt Cheryl's fingers at her center. She bit her lip and they found her barrier. She flexed her hips up as her clit was captured by Cheryl's lips. Just as she was ready to crest, she slammed her hips down on Cheryl's hand and felt the tearing of her maidenhead. She was lost in the pleasure/pain of her first orgasm by her lover. Giving herself to the only person she ever wanted to make love to.

Cheryl looked up and saw the tears falling from Lynn's eyes. She pulled her hand out and saw the blood. Her heart shattered at what her lover had just given her. "Why didn't you warn me?" She asked and tried to kiss the tears away.

"I wouldn't have it any other way." Lynn hugged her close as her body trembled. "I love you so much." She pulled Cheryl closer when she tried to move away.

"We need some towels love." Cheryl kissed Lynn and went to wash up. She grabbed the big towel and got the end wet. She brought it back to the bed, kneeled down and softly started cleaning her lover's core. "You planned all this didn't you?"

"From the moment I knew I loved you." Lynn looked as her wife tended to her. "At first it was just a dream... then a fantasy... then a plan."

"And you didn't tell anyone did you?" Cheryl was humbled. "What about all the...?"

"They don't matter. None of them held your heart." She reached down and stroked her wife's face. "Come to bed dear, we'll clean the rest up in the morning" Lynn reached for her lover and pulled her into her arms. Cheryl pulled the comforter over them and skin to skin, they fell asleep, their hearts beating as one.

The Beginning!

Post Script:

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Nicole2023Nicole2023over 1 year ago

I enjoyed the story….I wondered the ages of everyone one tho

Rex0naRex0naover 1 year ago

The high moral standard/purity angle doesn't mesh with parent orgies involving cheating and betrayal. LicentiousGhoul is on point with their commentary.

okami1061okami1061over 1 year ago

So, I had previously rated this a 5 on my first reading some time back.

I loathed Cheryl's family. They were just plain evil. I won't explain why. It isn't worth my effort. Others have explained it well. And, unfortunately, you can already see in their behavior the next generation of that family are going to be pretty fucked up. My real question is: where was all this sociopathic behavior while Cheryl was growing up? How could people that crazy actually hide it? They clearly aren't with the kids. Why did they hide it from Cheryl? Or was Cheryl just so dumb she missed it?

Lynn was ... confusing. Exactly how can someone who has had no experience have any idea what their sexual orientation is? It would have been better to make it clear that she had no orientation; only love mattered, not gender. But she came across a bit ... scattered.

Of course, myhands said he cranked it all out in the midst of their crazy home life. So, I cut him a break and left it rated 5, because it mostly was.

ZephurosZephurosover 2 years ago

LicentiousGhoul said it better than I could.

I also didnt feel like I knew the main characters. There was so much other stuff about side and background characters. I knew Ida's character better than Lynn's, who by the end I disliked entirely.

Liked all your stories I've read so far but not this one. Sorry :(

beddybearbeddybearabout 3 years ago
Too many holes

The 2 parts have some apologies to do. The foursome for the way they deal that situation. Cheryl wasn't late at her party, she MISSED that party. All her friends were invited and none were still there when she come home.

Cheryl want that party to get her parents together. What's she done? She's gone eating miss johansson's pussy.

At least Cheryl was succesfullat one thing, her parents are still living under the same roof. I don't like all foursome thing and all the betrayal but the 4 of them are still in love together 5 years later.

I'm not sure if Cheryl really forgive them, Susan bring the kids to Cheryl while Sheila and Paul stay at home making love. Sheila didn't want to see her daughter? Cheryl just want to meet her sibling? To me Myhands keep us in the dark so we can made our own ending, like the author's done in forebidden.

So nobody says the I'm sorry thing, Susan was there only because she was the only available person of the foresome to bring the kids to Cheryl. Cheryl seem to understand the whole better enough to see her bro and sis. Like somebody said she doesn't have to like it.

Now about Lynne, at the beginning she not even sure she's a lesbian. In the middle she admitted looking somebody she could get chemistry and trust. Her solution? Waiting the honeymoon to lose her cherry. Imagine the face of Cheryl the first morning of her honeymoon if Lynne told her finally being lesbian is not for me. What a second chapter it could be.

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