Fourth Vector Ch. 06

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Nikias then picked up the story from Heron. "After Decon had taken a wife and had children, he later commissioned the building of a great temple in Malicoe's honor on the same spot as the altar. It was a grand temple for the time and the first official temple in the god's honor anywhere on Sorella."

"What's the significance of it though?" asked Jack. "Why would Barak be taking the treasury there of all places? What's the reasoning?"

"To get more of it," said Heron, quoting the drunken servant from earlier. "He's going to steal the sacred offering of Malicoe." Nikias visibly paled and choked as soon as he heard the words from his king.

"What is that offering? More gold?" asked Jack.

"Gold is the majority of it, yes," said Heron. "There are several artifacts in there of unquestionable value as well. Decon's original fighting sword for example as well as several of his queen Veratay's jewels. It's a literal goldmine for anyone so inclined to steal it."

Nikias interrupted the king. "But how could he steal it? That treasury is sacred! Any man who steals from the temple will be doomed forever by the gods themselves—every Sorellan knows that. How could Barak think to steal that treasure and not lose his soul?"

"I don't know," said Heron with a shake of the head. "We have to come to terms with the fact that there is some dark force over the man now, responsible for his actions."

"Surely, it wouldn't be so sacrosanct to a simple thief just looking for a payday, right?" asked Jack. "Maybe Barak isn't as religious as we all assume so the threats don't have any meaning to him."

Nikias and Heron both looked at each other before looking at Jack. "I don't think you understand, Jack. Every Sorellan child knows the story of the founders and the gods. Every Sorellan will make a pilgrimage to the temple at least once in their life. It is one of our only sacred places, central to our entire culture. It's inconceivable that he thinks to steal it."

Nikias intervened at that point. "Jack, to show you how important it is to our island, it has remained untouched even during the civil war. Even with half the island starving, no one has broken into the temple to steal the gold even just to remain alive. Even Daimanos knew better and left it alone. The threat of being damned forever by the gods is too powerful for Sorellans to overcome. If he hopes to steal the treasure, it can only mean there is some foreign force at work on Barak right now. To make him betray his own people and his homeland is unthinkable."

"It would be like if your emperor willingly destroyed his own cities and people just for material gain. His soul would be damned for all eternity," said Nikias while trying to put things into perspective.

Jack nodded as his brain processed the minister's words. Such an action wasn't imaginable even for someone as despicable as Charles IX. Yet, the equivalence let him know how important the treasure was to the Sorellans and what they had to do to stop Barak.

"How soon can we get there? If we have to stop him, we'll need to get moving quickly," said Jack.

Heron traced his finger along the path to Mount Tarpeious. "The journey will take several days. Unfortunately, most of it will have to be on foot. The path to the mountain is ancient and narrow, not good for horses. Not to mention, most of that countryside is still devastated from the war, so we'd have to travel lightly and quickly through the interior."

"We should get moving soon then. Especially if he has a head start of three days on us."

"He can't be moving that fast with that grain wagon though. It will be slow going for them, especially as they get closer to the mountain," said Nikias.

"We need to stop that man, and we need to do it soon," said Heron firmly while pointing to the mountain. "If he escapes this island with all that treasure, then the Sorellan people will have suffered through this civil war for no recompense. He must be stopped!"

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anubeloreanubeloreover 2 years ago

Just read the first page...I gather from comments on the last chapter that there was a sword/bayonet fight that you edited out... but in this chapter the characters reference a "hand-to-hand fight" that never happened.

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If you ever decide to do a new editing pass (and this story is definitely good enough for it to be well worth mending these problems, in my opinion), then in addition to fixing the issues with incredibly short-range rifled, breech-loading guns on the ships, and the unbelievable amounts of damage caused to the steel-armored ships by black powder cannon firing solid shot (if a black powder cannon can damage the Valiant's guns, then either they're terrible, terribly built guns, or those cannon are using some kind of magical black powder with depleted uranium solid shot, or something)...it might be worthwhile to scan for references to the scenes you correct/change.

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To end on a positive note: thank you so much for choosing to eliminate anything involving Jack fighting Diamanos with a bayonet. I didn't read it, and I'm eternally grateful I didn't have to. Lol. If it wasn't for the references to "hand-to-hand combat" here, I wouldn't have remembered the comments mentioning a bayonet vs sword battle in the original.

As I said in my comment on the last chapter, I'm definitely going to keep going, I'm just...noting things as I notice them. I may compile them all into an email eventually, which will probably be more efficient than comments, and possibly less annoying for you.

CJMcCormickCJMcCormickabout 4 years agoAuthor
RE: BruceWo

Thank you for your kind words, Bruce! Chapter 7 is just pending for approval now. I'm guessing it will probably go up either tomorrow or Thursday. I have a short novella going up tomorrow so you'll get a double dosage of me two days in a row. If you're interested, I also have up to Chapter 9 completed on my Patreon. As well as some cool things like maps of the Vector and character profiles. There's a link in my profile for that if you want to check it out. I'm looking forward to continuing this story with all of you!

BruceWoBruceWoabout 4 years ago
Checking regularly

When is ch 7 coming? In these dark times we need some good news.

BruceWoBruceWoabout 4 years ago
This

Has become my favourite story of Literotica. You have surpassed Tefler - whose stories are lees prolific and more tangled. Likewise LienGeller, Consnyje. Keep up your wonderful story.

BruceWoBruceWoabout 4 years ago
Loving this

Wonderful cliff hanger

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