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Throwing my head back as the first jets fly into your backdoor. My hard normal thrusts turn into hard jerks and hip twitches, as I let loose 5 hard jets of cum into your tightest hole. Slowing to a stop with my cock buried, I twitch a couple more times as the last small jets push out into you.
Holding still for another 30 seconds or so, I wait until the highest point of sensation goes down, leaving me able to pull my cock out of you, without having a rush of pain and pleasure. My cock comes out with a loud rush of air pushing inside you. Anna knee waddles over in front of me, looking up with a 'may I' look on her face, before slipping the head in her mouth. Her expert mouth starts to bob on my shaft, expertly sucking my slightly deflated shaft.
A quick look over at Evan is returned with a shrug
"She just loves cock man...doesn't matter where it was" from him.
Allowing her to continue sucking for another 2 minutes, before tapping her on the cheek, letting her know I'm satisfied.
"Let's get the two of you ready to go" as I wander back over to the table to gather my clothes, and shoo you two off with Evan. Before I go, Anna asks if I'm going to lease her as well.
"I have a month to decide on that. But I'll make you a deal, if you're not leased before then, I'll lease you for the office. How's that?"
Satisfied, she almost bounces, her tits bouncing up and down as she spins around toward your trainer Evan. Evan pulls your leashes off the back sides of your stands, hooking one on each of your collars, he parades you out of the room in front of him, giving each of your butts a hearty slap.
"Last time I get to for two of em...had to" smirking back at me as you all walk back toward your temporary rooms, 2 of you going there for the last time.
My response of "I'm just here to lease man. I'm no committee on morals" gets a full on laugh out of him as he turns toward the door.
"And shoot me a text. We're heading out on the boat this weekend." Evan giving me a thumbs up right before the door closes behind him, signaling that he would.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 1 year agoInteresting story premise. I had difficulty trying to figure out what character was speaking. I think the at least some of the confusion was caused by more than one character speaking in the first person (viz., "I"). And then came a "you" designation, but who was speaking and to which character. Almost always, from the beginning the story line establishes which character is speaking and then that remains a constant throughout the narrative. Jumping around makes for headaches.
SirAliasover 1 year agoYou need to stick to a perspective. Don't use a 'you' and an 'I' perspective. Never use a you for a typical narritive. Your writing style is fine otherwise but the perspective makes it so difficult to track and read.
Anonymousabout 3 years agoYour POV changed from the girl, to the boss, to the buyer in the span of about 4 sentences!
You really need to get a handle on who is narrating your story!
Anonymousover 6 years agoThis was a well plotted story with a nice sprinkling of original subject matter. My only criticism would be the rather confusing switch from what seemed like an all-seeing narrator, to the thoughts and viewpoints of the gent and his girls. It would be best to stick with one voice whenever possible. But all in all, it was well crafted erotica. Well done !
