"Tell her yourself next Sunday," he said and slammed the door. Neville stood on the porch until he heard all the latches and laughed, looking at Brion. "I ever tell you how much I love your Pops."
"All the time bruh, all the time."
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Perhaps it's not about the sex but the furthering of a relationship. Not every reader is here to beat it and I like to write for everyone. Let's face it mind blowing sex doesn't happen everyday and some people appreciate what happens in between. Just saying.more...
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How the fuck did this chapter make it to the hall of fame??? There's nothing erotic or extraordinary about it. I'm sure there's been a mistake. Seriously I'm totally confused. Story is interesting but this chapter doesn't deserve to the in the hall of fame at all. Your previous chapters are actually hotter. Why this??? Was expecting something spectacular. What an anti climax. Just saying. :(
Confused chic.more...
love the series, need more!
Great story, funny and touching and sexy as f*ck! (I'm hetro white female :) )
Love the characters, and although some of how they spoke was hard to follow a bit at first I quickly got the flow (ps they dont sound uneducated to me !) I hope you flesh this out a bit and make into an ebook one day maybe? I've paid for books with a hell of a lot less going for them.more...
Ditto.........
I agree Durty.........people need to chill a bit. I love the series and your writing!!!!
Well said, Durty. Keep writing.
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