Then, she quietly took his sword and his sword belt, and rose to her feet. She leaned over him, looking at him, looking at what had been done to him.
Her face a bloody mask, she walked out of the stable and went back into the castle. She walked up the stairs, naked and blood-streaked, back to the room she had shared with her brother.
In the room, she looked around and saw her own jerkin and breeches and boots, and his armour. She dressed in her clothes, and donned his armour.
Then she looked at herself in the glass, and took a knife, and cut her hair short to match his.
Then, when she resembled her brother as best she could, she put on his sword belt, and put his sword in his scabbard, with his blood still on it, and she went back down to the stables.
She ignored the lifeless body of her brother on the ground, and woke her own horse, and mounted him, and rode out into the night.
***
The old sagas record that, some days after the return of the party from Casman, one of its number, Siegfa, a young knight, was found murdered in Baron Hargest's stable. His throat had been cut. To add the luridness of the crime, he was naked when he was found. His sister, to whom he was devoted, was nowhere to be found. As Hargest's men searched the castle for the culprit, they found the naked corpse of a serving girl in the cesspit. She had been drowned; marks were found on her neck to show that she'd been held down, and it was also evident that she had been intimate with a man relatively recently.
Suspicion immediately feel upon Siegfa's sister. It was rumoured that her feelings for her brother were unhealthy, and that she had found him in the stable with the girl. The court of inquiry found in the sister's absence that she had killed her brother on the spot and then chased the unfortunate girl, found her hiding in the cesspit, had murdered her too, then fled. It was well known that Siegfa's sister could withstand the fumes of the cesspit because it was part of the legend of how she and her brother had been found.
The sagas end without further mention of Siegfa's sister, but as far as they were concerned, that's what she was: the jealous, murderous, tormented, incest-obsessed sister of a brave, handsome youth who had been having robust, manly fun with a willing wench.
The sagas were wrong.
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Hi again! You can call me MaryAnn! Anyways, I recommend staying of this site, and when you want to post the backstory that isn't literotica-approved, you use the site Wattpad and link the site somewhere either in the comments or in the post it that's allowed!more...
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Hi Anonymous,
Well, wow! Thank you. I'm so glad you liked this and I'm grateful to everyone who's given it a positive vote.
We will be returning to Freya in the next chapter. But you needed this chapter because Carfryn, Siegfa's sister, is going to end up being an important player in this story.
This is going to be a big story - I've written several thousand words more than I've submitted, and I'm warning everyone now that not very far down the line I'm going to arrive at content which will not meet Literotica's criteria for publication - not because it's the kind of thing which ought to be on asstr.org, or whatever (and I've nothing against that site in principle, but it's not my preferred reading.) The thing is, I've got a major character that you haven't met yet, who has a severely traumatic backstory which has to be told, but literotica has a rule that all sexual behaviour has to be presented as taking place between characters over 18, I guess because it's supposed to be erotic. I respect that rule and I'm not going to challenge it, but it means that this story can't be properly told here because the stuff that happened to my character doesn't meet those criteria. I don't know what to do about that yet, but in the meantime, I hope you'll keep reading.more...
Keep It Up
This is so well written I can picture this being an Anime series! I think it's because of your fantastic descriptions and character/world building! Can't wait for the next installment.
One criticism: I prefer the Freya story line to this. Go back to her! I want to know what happened to her!!!more...
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