I asked, "Are you still with him?"
She said, "Oh God NO. I took him to the hospital and when we left there, I drove to my car and I told him if I ever saw him again I would hang his balls from my rearview mirror. All I could do was cry and try to figure out how I could get back in your good graces. I know now that may never happen but I will always hope."
I said, "I am sorry. I can't even think of that ever happening."
I got up and walked outside to wait for Lola.
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NOW IF THAT EXCUSE DONT WORK
get ready for the next one. TK U MLJ LV NV
OKAY, so the story does not posess perfect syntax.
So Fucking what. If you deem yourself so apt at finding out the faults in the story , why not not edit it yourself & send it to the author of this story you ungrateful schmuck.
Firstly the site may be for wankers, yet some authors write about the human condition, exploring all varied probabilities of life, & then after reading a story about a man who was lucky to find out the true nature of his fiancee before they married & how he overcame his loss, you have the gall to be a sycophantic cum guzzling, debbie does dallas, know it all Biyatch.
Next time if you wanna complain about the fucking grammer, Fuckface, take a stapler, staple your balls to the chair you sit on & then complain.
i'm sure, more than my ranting & raving invective's here, you would still manage to find grammatical errors here too, you know how i know that, because from now on i live rent free in your head.
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