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- Friends Ch. 01
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Life was good. We found a large lot at the back of a cul-de-sac in a new development, near a large hill and built a 4000 square foot home on it. No one was stumbling over anyone anymore and, unless we had more children, it would meet our needs for the next fifteen years or until the kids had grown and gone. Thereafter we would have to reconsider our options but that was a long time in the future. Rosemary studied for the bar in our new state and passed [no surprise there, she's a very good attorney]. As a corporate attorney I didn't need to pass the bar but did so more to deny her holding it over my head than to meet a professional imperative. But, having done so it made my employer happy so it was a win-win for me, which brings me back to where I was before my digression on Rosemary.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 4 years agoyou can't write a story. It seems you are not telling a story but writing about the area and people generally. No names, no introductions. Very bad experience.
Anonymousover 15 years agoDon't worry about some of the negatoids who must have miserable lives with nothing better to do than leave their silly comments. This is a good story so far and who cares if it is true or not. You show talent as a storyteller. Part of the reason for the 100 is because it deserves more than a 75.
Anonymousover 15 years agolawyer...well I'm not and i doubt that many readers of the site are so shut the fuck up..You write like one
Anonymousover 15 years agoI didn't even read your story. Your introduction put me off completely.
Don't tell your reader that the story isn't true. Let the reader decide. They aren't all idiots, you know. Did Shakespeare or Dickens or Joyce or Rowling ever say, "By the way, before you read this, please note that it isn't true"?
You are posting a story on a porn site. Don't get so up yourself.
Anonymousover 15 years agoTHAT NO ONE, ESPECIALLY INTERESTED IN. sORRY BUT IT'S YOUR LIFE AND YOU HAD TO WRITE IT BUT WE ALL HAVE STORIES.
