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Click here"Give it a minute," he begged. "Please, it's only temporary. Don't kill me, please. She'll be back to normal very soon."
He was right and that saved his miserable little life. Slowly, as the control chip recalibrated itself, the effect of the manipulation receded. It was like a veil was lifted, I could see her change in front of me.
She rubbed her eyes and looked around, confused. "Sis? Is that you? What are you doing here?"
"Yes! Yes, it's me," I sobbed, barely able to speak. "I'm sorry it took me so long to find you."
We hugged and cried and it was as if the world had stopped around us. My little sister, the sweet, innocent girl I had left behind five long years ago on Thoria, I had almost lost her forever. I still couldn't believe it, that after all this time and all the worries, I finally had her back.
"You're free, sis, you're free. Everything will be okay."
- COMMENTS
SensitiveHandsover 4 years agoI haven't read the other story in this line up. I opted to read the prequel first. If there is a gap between the two, I most especially hope you fill it in sometime. Thank you for sharing your time and story with us.
DJ
farbeyondourstarsover 4 years agoAuthorI tried my best to resolve the most important things, but you've got to leave something for a sequel ;-)
That being said, at 50,000 words (150 pages roughly) it got a bit long and ate up evenings and weekends for months, so I'm exhausted. However, If you've got ideas on where to take this, just let me know - either here in the comments or via direct message. No promises though, for the time being I'll work on some other unfinished stories (shorter ones!).
Thank you for reading and for that nice comment :)
Sxualchocol8over 4 years agoThe end?? THE END?!?! WTH?!?! Dude! You can't just end like THAT! It's like baking a chocolate cake, frosting it, cutting a slice, and then you leave it on the table and WALK AWAY, EATING A BANANA!!! You don't DO that!! GAH! Gimme an epilogue...gimmie...gimmie SOMETHING!!! ARGH!! YOU'RE KILLING ME, SMALLS!!!
Ok, rant over. However, my analogy still stands. Too many loose ends and not enough conclusions. Until this point, pretty darned good writing. This ending still needs an...well, an ending. Please? 😥
Sc8
