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Anna patted my arm behind my back, "Hmm?"
"They are calling your name." she softly said. I moved to my spot and another salvo of spit and words. And I heard the distinct words of 'General'.
I thought that was it, but the room was in an uproar, Anna was beside herself with joy for some reason and my unit outside cheered and yelled. The only one that had a poker face, sort of, was me. I know the creed, listen to your superiors, but right now I really, really could not give a fuck.
Snakey again repeated the words, "Now I appoint you General of The First Army in the service of Gal Federation and this appointment he will always carry out our Creed to the end of the stars. Gods be praised."
I was silently ecstatic at this news but outside I was stoic, grace could be seen around me, my creed in my shadow.
Gods be damned.
I'll be free.
- COMMENTS
grizxover 3 years agoYou have a nice touch with the romance sections and the story is moving along pretty well also. As far as the editing comments, reliable editors seem to be a major difficulty on this, other sites and Amazon paid books as well. It just seems to be royal pain finding reliable people willing to do that level of service for free. And this site is a free public service as well. I for one appreciate the time and efforts you are putting into your story as well as the efforts of the managers that make your crafting available to the rest of us.
Anonymousover 3 years agoI've never been on other planets. That said I think military time here is universal as our 18:00 hours is simply 1800 hours. Nice story I hope you find an editor.
KalDarovover 3 years agoAuthorIt's explained pretty well in the chapter that person who does the promoting is the Admiral, or in this case Snakey, he's the man in charge of the branch of army that Kal is in. 1st army in this case.
About the storry looking like crap; it's because I do all the edditing myself, since everyone I reached out to has not said anything about doing my work. I'm still trying but I was wating for a very long time (2-3months) for 5 editors to respond that I just decided to upload my stories and see what happens. Mispelling, grammar and senetance structure is lacking I am aware.
I apologize for that since I speak 5 languages, I'm not excusing myself. I know I need to work harder.
Again thank you for your feedback good or bad. keep the comments comming any questions please ask.
TheOldRomanticover 3 years agoA great chapter, but it has been a bit confusing at some point. I guess it was Google translator's fault, that lately I'm working very poorly, omitting some of the texts.
I believe I understand that the person who promotes Kal is the chief of the people rescued from the slave-trading pirates. If this is not correct, I hope you will explain it to me, if you can or see fit.
5 * for you.
I apologize for my English, isn't my native language.
