Tingle. "Yes, Jack, that should be fine."
"Good. Make it so!" He watched her eyes flash. "Now, would you care to join me for a little midnight snack of peanut butter and jelly sandwiches before we hit the sack? Tomorrow's going to be a big day, after all. I mean, just going to the grocery store with you along is going to be a great adventure."
"That sounds lovely, Jack."
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I don't say this enough on here but this is well written, and by association, this author is good. There seems to be very little that logically bugs me in this story. I don't know if it's a streak of luck, my own mood, well chosen literary devices and plot, or just sheer brilliance. I normally have to overlook one or more 'issues' but this story has been pretty good.
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