Gift From A God Ch. 08

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AbbeFaria
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He simply stared at me with his massive face expressionless and flat.

“Will she be okay? I don’t want to just leave her.”

“I don’t know. Mistress will come back to check on her when she feels better. Now you-“

“Now I go home, I know, I know.”

I said a silent goodbye to Amber and, with a wounded heart and a broken soul, jumped away.

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Well that was...disturbing. Get yourself a proper editor and you'll be well on your way to being one of the best authors on the site.

Clearly you're one of the few talented writers here.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Well that made for difficult reading. Definitely not much of a turn on, but very well written.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
AWESOME

That chapter was just incredible. You have a Harry Potter book in you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
rough

dude that was borderline sick, it got the point across but holy shit that was sick.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Excellent work!

I'd really like to see how this plays out! Quite an intriguing twist!

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