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Click hereIn the morning, I woke up and recalled what had happened the night before. It felt like it was all a dream, but considering where I was, I knew that it had been reality. Neither girl was lying next to me, so I got up and headed toward the bathroom. The door was slightly ajar and the two girls were both in the shower fooling around. I smiled and went back to bed.
When I woke up for the second time, I got dressed and headed to the kitchen, I caught Beth just as she was heading out and we shared a quick kiss, and I slapped her on the ass as she turned away to leave. "Real funny." She said.
"We'll have to do this again some time." I replied. She just smiled and walked away. I watched her ass as she walked and then closed the door. I turned around and saw Alexandra standing there, wearing just a t-shirt and panties.
"I'll walk you out." She said.
"Was your first time everything you wanted it to be?" I asked.
"And more." She responded. I walked towards her and leaned in close.
"I think we should break your last rule." I whispered. And then I kissed her. At first, I didn't move my mouth, but then I began to explore her tongue with mine and we held each other for what seemed like eternity. I did not grope her but just held onto her shoulders and neck. I finished with a kiss on the cheek and then I turned and walked away. As I turned around to look at her one last time, she smiled and blushed. This was the first time that I had sex with Alexandra, but it definitely would not be the last.
- COMMENTS
Bestreadingover 7 years agoA good beginning effort. Much better than many of the beginners that have published. Keep at it. I look forward to more reading.
Anonymousalmost 9 years agoI'd say not bad for a first attempt and better than a lot of stuff on here. Work on the grammar a bit more. And keep writing. Everyone's got to start somewhere and it takes practice to get better. The only way you get there is by keeping on. Maybe try a couple of different versions of this story and try to improve it. Depends what you're aiming for but you can either go for realism or over the top fantasy (seems like that's what you're going for).
Anonymousalmost 9 years ago.... But better than many of the stories on this site !
Anonymousalmost 9 years agoSeriously, don't write anything. Avoid signing your name if possible.
