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Click hereBoy he loved the girl's night out. He knew what went on with the other women but would never say anything whereas his wife and his lover always came home horny and the sex that they had was always amazing. They both drained their drinks and then he took ker by the hand and led her up the stairs.
He locked the house up and when he reached the bedroom Piya was in the bed and was playing gently with her pussy. He stood and watched. She knew her body intimately and he loved to watch her play with herself. She was not rubbing herself hard she was just gently caressing it.
He was tired but his cock was telling him something else. It began to grow again as he watched her play with herself. He climbed onto the bed and just laid down next to her. He put out a hand and began to gently caress her breasts. Her nipples were erect again and he loved to watch the way that they grew.
She looked him and beckoned him to her. He did as she told him. He climbed on top of her and placed his cock into her pussy. Together they moved as one and this time there was no passion it was making love.
Slow and sensuous and he loved this as much as the sex that they had. It was slow and gentle and they could go for ages like this. This was not about cumming. This was about showing each other that they still loved one another. It went on for about an hour. They had both orgasmed out so this was just the perfect end to a wondrous evening. They fell asleep with his cock still imbedded in her.
placed in LW, talks about cheating wives, but is ultimately about a couple in love with, and faithful to, each other.
In real life, I don't think this would fly. This woman would have to be a saint not to mess around a little. Why would she subject herself to the 3 other women when you know when they get together any other time they will be talking about their wild night out. She really couldn't have much in common with these ladies. She needs to find new friends.
....it was a good read with some obvious conflicts....about her husband allowing her to play away, but her not doing anything of the kind. Her friends slutting about like cats, but she remains faithful. The environment is fraught with difficulty and unless she is Superwoman, eventually, life will happen and on a not so good night, she'll betray her man.
As I said, too many conflicts to be realistic.
Oh, most married women are very firm in their faithfulness (at least those I've known well), so the friends are an issue. In most social environments, the sluts tend to gather and the honest women tend to avoid them....the guilt by association factor, being too strong to ignore.
The end of my post, not intended to insult our gender unkown author, not posted in your bio. I love to guess before I look. Yes I have been wrong, trying to amuse, with a unwanted flirty comment, to a guy author , yuk! *~*
You've written a lot of stories and your scores are good for this category, but if your writing style in other stories are consistent with this one, the success you have with LW readers surprises me. While this is a pretty good story, I found it seemed dragged out at first, do we really need to know every tiny detail of her dressing? Also, does her husband give her the okay to have a go at other men or not? ( I suspect you did the same thing that I did in "Fulfilling his Fantasy," you probably changed your ending and forgot to change the beginning.) My last comment may be nit-picking, but is this really a LW story? Reading LW's qualifications the only possible fit I see here is the actions of her friends. I would have thought this would better fit Romance.
Let me repeat, you've had a lot more success than I have on Lit. and I congratulate you. This is just one reader thinking on paper, and telling you what I noticed. If it helps, good. If not, your mind's delete key is handy. GOOD LUCK AND KEEP WRITING0-dreamer.