Kirsty wanted to fight it. Fight him. Fight them. Fight sleep. She should be thinking. Planning an escape. But she was too tired. It was all too much. As the darkness of exhaustion overcame her. She slipped into a deep, dreamless slumber.
***
The sun was barely peaking over the horizon in the east. Over their home land perhaps, thought Sven. The day should be glorious. One more closer to home. Closer to the safety of their world.
But still the echoes of her cries filled his mind. More like cry. He supposed he should be thankful that it was just the one. But somehow that made it worse. As if all of the pleasure...and pain...were held back for as long as she could fight it. Fight them. Then released suddenly as if a dike had broken and flooded their whole world.
Bjorn had heard it too. Felt it more deeply perhaps. As he tossed in the berth above him, he had cursed. "That should have been me."
Sven watched as Mikael emerged up the stairs. For a man that had spent the night in the arms of a woman, he looked...less than satisfied. Angry. Frustrated. More morose than when they had talked even. This was not good.
He watched his Mikael walked over to where Bjorn worked at the nets preparing to drop them deep into the sea, seeking out their catch for this day. Their livelihood. Their life's blood. He threw something at him. It took a moment for Sven to recognize the pattern of Bjorn's favorite shirt. The one that she had been wearing when they left his cabin.
"Sorry. You may need to get another favorite shirt, little brother," Mikael pronounced slowly as Bjorn unfurled the shredded piece of material. The look of fury on his face had Sven take a step automatically in their direction. But Mikael was smart enough to know when retreat was in order and walked towards the back deck as if nothing had happened.
But something had. Something deep and painful. "This was not a good idea," Sven said quietly once more as Bjorn rose from where he had been crouched. He walked to him and threw the shirt at Sven's chest. "She is mine tonight. There will be no choice this time. Do you understand me?"
Sven felt his youngest brother's pain and simply nodded. This had been a very bad idea.
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Please continue, I am so curious to see what happens...
Once again you've taken a basic story premise 'kidnap woman, use for wife/breeding' and added a few levels to it. That is what makes this a story worth reading. Well done chapter.
The single...
...point of failure for me in this story, that keeps me from enjoying it, is the conceit it seems to have and that the brothers have that they are behaving ethically. That what they are doing isn't *actually* meeting and building a relationship on totally false pretenses, and then kidnapping women away from their lives and families and careers so that these men, unwilling to leave a bleak fishing life, can be fulfilled.
But miracle of miracles! It turns out the woman (eventually) adapts and likes it, and maybe in two generations defends the system herself. And it's done out of 'love' and a need to fulfill and gosh how much they respect the wit and courage of this woman, though never e ouch to actually ask beforehand.
No. This story takes itself seriously, as though these are real people living in the real world, with real motivations and stories to tell. In that kind of setting? These men cannot be good and at the same time think what they're doing is good, which is now the story tries to treat them. It could work if they admitted, at least to themselves, that they had a good helping of bastard in them.more...
Love the Complexity
I do enjoy reading this story and I'm happy you're picking it back up. I love how complex the characters are. The brothers aren't on the same page and they are learning how to keep Kristy as they go along. Kristy isn't just submitting to her kidnappers but there is potential for her to love them and to help them with their troubles. So far I really like it and am interested in what the little brothers kink could be.more...
Eagerly awaited
While I never considered blood letting erotic, I am drawn to this story and look forward to the next chapter.
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