I don't know how many times I made her cum that night. Over and over. It was like a dam had burst and she was able to be pleasured for the first time. And it was me making her feel good. Dad watched us, and I know he kept stroking his dick. But I didn't care. He was through. I didn't know what would happen tomorrow, but I knew that in this bed, I'd taken his place with my mom. And when I finally exploded inside her, draining my cock into her womb, I told her I loved her, loved her more than I could ever imagine.
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Charlie's a boy who's in love as well as in lust with his own mother
This is a remarkably well-written as well as exceedingly hot story. I love it. Charlie displays a maturity well beyond his years. The kid's so excited by his mother that even when he just kisses her or she kisses him he's so hard that his young cock's practically busting out of his pants and he's nearly creaming his jeans. Yet he never pushes her beyond her comfort zone. Charlie's in it for the long haul. When he learns what his mom wants--another baby, which his dumbass father refuses to give her--he says, simply, "I could give you the sperm." He sure could--that boy's potent young balls are up to the job, and then some. TD's choice of words is brilliant. As he's about to enter his mother: "I moved completely between her legs, my cock hanging hard and thick between us." The reader can just picture the instrument that's going to deliver Charlie's baby batter to his mom. Then the gifted author perfectly captures the feelings--a combination of surprised delight and the deepest awe--of a boy doing the unimaginable as he's "thinking the whole time, I'mfuckingmymomI'mfuckingmymomI'mfuckingmymom." He brings his beloved mother to multiple convulsive cums and finally unloads his young balls and shoots her the sperm he promised. The dam is truly broken, as Charlie and his mom engage in a nonstop fuckfest for days on end, the boy's hard from the moment he wakes up till they fall asleep. No need to hide anything from his father. The cold unfeeling rat's getting his own miserable kicks, jerking off while watching Charlie's hot incestuous fucks. The kid's suitably contemptuous: "It's nothing, Mom. Just Dad cumming in his pjs." Five stars, of course. This story is Hall of Fame material.more...
5 stars
She could go out and find a black man, but that would be another mouth to feed. She wouldnt need to worry about another car to pull up to get the kid. So the most logical way to get the most welfare money again for another 20 years, is to get knocked up by one who is right in her own house. Thats why her husband was grinning.more...
Well done
I had followed the previous three parts, and to be honest it really wasn't my cup of tea. I'm really glad that you decided to write this chapter from the son's POV, from being a 'fetish' story, it has become a 'love' story, for me at least. I loved reading about Charlie's feelings about his mom, the extended kissing scenes and him going down on her ("soft, soft, soft" is just the perfect way to describe it!)
Not sure how you're going to continue this story, I guess from reading the previous 3 chapter its not going to be to my liking, but thank you for writing this one.more...
Weird
What husband would agree to that without some considerable discussion with his wife. I seems like a few more paragraphs would make it better. Otherwise I liked the story and it was well written.
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