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Click here"How did I fair?" She asked taking the seat next to him.
"Excellent," Harish acknowledged with a smile of fulfillment.
While other passengers in the bus seemed glued to the movie, which was nearing the climax, Samyukta and Harish were smiling at each other after what looked like an intermission. They began dreaming about their stay in the city before leaving for the airport the next day.
The bus slowed down after a few minutes and took a turn inside a fuelling station.
"The bus will halt for at least ten minutes here," Harish whispered into her ears. "Let us get ourselves cleaned up for the rest of the journey."
Very well written. However, the third person narrative changes often to first person. Take care of this in future writing.
This story is a load of crap ~ in the very first two paragraphs Samyukta is both preparing to leave AND arrive Dubai!!! Just couldn't go on after that!
we know each other
I think I AM HUNTING FOR YOUR STORIES
WHY DONT U BRING THIS IN TAMIL FONT---KUMAR