Good Friends

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javawarrior
javawarrior
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Her heart was still at odds, but her body knew one thing for certain: Brian was perfect. Or at least, fucking Brian was perfect. She didn't know which was which and didn't care.

The two looked at each other at last for several more moments of blissful silence. They had never spent a longer time looking at anyone else in the eyes, uninterrupted, and they knew it at the same time. He could think of nothing to say, and neither could she.

When she finally broke the silence, her tone was carefree at last. She brushed her hair back behind her ears and said, with a smirk, "Any questions?"

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Great job!!

This is one of the best pieces I've read here. Perfect mix of story, reality and sex. Doesn't get much better. Keep writing.

patientleepatientleeover 10 years ago
Very sexy tale.

Very well structured. Very sweet too. The push and pull of the action was much like sex itself. The ring was a nice interlude. I'm sorry I don't get my vote in before the end of the contest.

OleguyOleguyover 10 years ago
Nice !

I didn't see literature or anything like that. I just experienced a lovely warm believable story that made me wish I had met Sara in my formative years.

elrayo41elrayo41over 10 years ago
FIRST CLASS LITERATURE

CONGRATULATIONS. This may be most literary story ever to appear on LITEROTICA. You capture not only the emotional rollercoaster of the first time sexual experience but a deeper sense of what it truly feels like to care for another person. I've been married to my best friend for 53 years and I still remember how worried I was the first time we fucked.

THIS story is so good it reminds me of a story Hemingway wrote called "Down in Michigan." It was left out of his first anthology because Hemingway used the F word and Scribner(at that time) had a strict intolerance of "blatant profanity." This story belongs in the NEW YORKER or PLOUGHSHARES where it can compete for Best American Short Stories. Five stars is not enough praise for a piece of art.

DejahTDejahTover 10 years ago
Never too late

I loved your story! I have a friend, he's been there for me for 30+ years and until this year, we had shared one kiss. Even now, we haven't had sex, probably never will, but our friendship expanded this fall. The sharing of erotic thoughts, a shared fantasy, an unveiling of inhibitions and pointed discussions made for some real growth in our relationship, in a totally never anticipated way. We can never go back but are closer than before. In a way, our experience paralleled your story without the physical. You put in words what sex with him would be like the very first time!

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