"Oh Kevin," I breathed, crying in relief. He got my hands free and I threw them around his chest, burying my face in his neck. "Thank God. I was so frightened. I knew it was you ... and then I didn't."
"Shhh," he soothed me, stroking my hair. His softening cock was still inside me and with each hitching sob I forced it slowly out. "It's okay, Jeannie. It's all over now."
I took a deep, wavering breath and held his head in my hands so that I could look into his eyes. I saw concern there, love too, but there was also a conflicted delight that he had achieved what he set out to do, but maybe hurt me in the process. He hadn't. I was just shocked and emotional; stunned from the intensity of my orgasm and the realism of my 'assault'.
"Thank you," I whispered. "That was ... incredible." And then I hugged him tight again, taking comfort from the safety of his body pressed into mine.
"So do you want to do it again," he asked, a smile in his voice.
"Oh, God yes," I enthused, rubbing my pussy wetly against him. "But not too soon. I won't fall for it as easily next time."
"One more thing?" he asked quietly.
"Anything," I sighed into his neck. My heart had almost returned to its normal rate and I was basking in the afterglow of the most wonderful, wonderful sex.
"Jeannie, will you marry me?" He rolled to the side so that he could watch my expression.
"Yes," I said without hesitation. "With all my heart. Now untie my legs and let me love you properly."
He did.
And I did.
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Whoof
You definitely earned a fiver rating on this one, and not just for the 'Hot' qualification. This was an extremely impressive chapter. The fear/excitement was the most convincing version of this fantasy I've seen. More than once I had to force myself to go backwards instead of skipping to the end of the chapter to resolve the mystery. You created just enough doubt to be unsettling, but like any good intense scene, it promises to be more enjoyable the second time through when it can just be enjoyed.
One last thing: if you ever decide to go into the mystery/suspense/horror genre, rest assured that you've got the talent.more...
Good one
Very nicely crafted
Power
Oh, the power of Jeannie's imagination! Oh, the power of two young peoples love!
Thanks so much for the images.
Good job describing the war of her feelings. The idea of 'what if' is a strong turn-on for many women. Men, if they're good, learn how to fulfill those feelings in the perfect way, just as Kevin did. Nicely done.more...
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