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She learnt how to ride him and how revelled in his moans and shaking but when his orgasm began as she plunged down on his aching swollen cock he flipped her and grasped her ass and fucked her ramming into her until she was delirious with pleasure. Then she felt it! His cock swelled even more as her tight cunt contracted and squirted around him. When he shot inside her she thought she had died and gone to heaven she loved the feel of cum in her hand and mouth but inside her pussy it was delicious each burst triggering waves of pleasure for both. Grace had discovered how much she loved to fuck and Bruce lay comatose on top of her his spent cock deep inside her tight virgin hole.
"MMMmmmm that was so good" Cooed Grace. Bruce spent the night with Grace and she gave him her bloodstained panties as a gift. Grace had her inheritance now and she was determined to use all she had learnt to get everything she wanted.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 15 years agoAn amazing story. Well written, descriptive, and well-paced. The only flaws I can find are small punctuation, spelling, or grammatical errors. What you need is a good editor, or someone to go over your work a little while before its published and fix it up.
The only question I have is, why are you wasting your time on sex stories? Your work is definitely good enough for stores - i know if i was a publisher, i would consider myself lucky to find some one as good as you to work with. If you really enjoy writing erotic prose, why not write an entire novel with a few sex scenes thrown in? That would be a good compromise - at least that way you would get paid.
So, a well-written little piece of work, but i still don't understand why some one as good as you would be writing prose for sites like this.
Anonymousabout 18 years agowell- written. just because it's porn doesn't mean you don't need to pay attention to how you write it, something you obviously understand very well. that was so f***ing hot.
Nookiehunterabout 18 years agoThere is nothing like a little, rich whore. She has plenty of money, but she wants things like control of the money or to move to the head of the line to buy a house she wants or a car she wants or many other things. I have met many of them.
Anonymousabout 19 years agoWith each of your stories they get better. This was great.
Anonymousabout 19 years agoWhat a delightful little story. I wonder how many young girls enjoy their defloration in this manner.
