"You're the only man I want to spend the rest of my life with so I'm not going to go looking anymore."
"In that case we need to try and get some sleep now. And the storm is over with now..."
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A fine story
I read your story, I liked it. I then read the comments. I will tell you that when I come to this site to read stories, I am not expecting the stories to be written by authors. They are written by members, so given that we are coming here to enjoy the "member" contributions, I am able to overlook errors that do not inhibit me from understanding the story you are telling. I thank you for taking your time to tell your tale and entertaining us with your writings. I look forward to more as your stories fit the classification and I liked your characters.more...
Hey Gramps
I'm going to say it -- yes, there are a lot of grammatical errors in your story but your pacing and the attention to detail was like a Grandpa was telling the story and I think it worked. My beef was with the dialogue, not all of it but absolutely when they have sex. I mean, she just fucked her grandpa, it's sort of a big deal and deserves more than referencing Grandpa's dick as a "hot sexy rod" I think is what you call it. Write some more and see what happens.more...
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