- Loving Wives
- Gratuities
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She knew.
"So?" she said.
"I'm afraid I'm not quite up to it at the moment, dear," Mark told her, lifting his limp cock and letting it fall again across his thigh. "Maybe in a few minutes?"
She looked toward the door. "Think we can get him to come back?"
Mark smiled. "Oh, he'll be back. He forgot his clip-board."
And there it sat, just visible through the opened doorway, balanced on the edge of the desk.
Karen smiled. Mark shook his head.
"What's the matter?" Karen asked.
"Well, I have another package due tomorrow, same courier service, and I can guarantee our friend Teddy will make sure he gets to deliver it. If this keeps up I won't get any work done at all this week!"
Someone knocked on the front door.
Mark sighed. "Get that, dear?" he said. "I'm sure it's for you."
Karen stood up, naked, and walked quickly to answer the door.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 18 years agoWhat an intriguing way to use dialogue to telescope into scene. The dry, intellectual voice of Mark contrasted neatly with the descriptions, though you could even take further liberties with language in your descriptions because of this relatively dry counterpoint. Structurally, beginning in media res is well done, though it would be interesting to use the photos on the computer as a segue into the flashback.
Anonymousalmost 18 years agoI've been visiting this site for years, and this is one of the best stories I've read. Bravo!
hornyinwvalmost 18 years agoOne of the best short stories I have read here. I like the way your incorporated the past and had the husband tell it while the wife stood by. The poor deliveryman, bet the rest of his day never was quite as good as the morning! lol You show great talent, keep writing.
