Grim Fairy Tales Ch. 01

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I wondered if it were her first time cheating on me—then recalled the comments made by some of the men about my interview. Suddenly I wanted to know and see more—both for peace of mind, as well as excitement as my eagerness.

Wondering if there were more videos similar to that one, I spent the next two days cleaning the garage, almost an obsession, searching for other recordings. And in between cleaning I watched the video of my little Snow White over and over, cumming several times each day as she was service several years ago by her Seven Dwarves, my very own co-workers who used her over and over...

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DocCISDocCISover 9 years agoAuthor
Updated version posted....

I recently was going through old stories and have uploaded a newer version of this story here with corrected spellings and grammar. Although never 100% perfect, hopefully this version flows a bit better...

DocCISDocCISover 11 years agoAuthor
Thanks everybody

I knew this story was different from Annie and Lapdancing and so would affect some of the fans of those stories differently than if it were a new story by somebody just starting. Interesting about some of the comments I've received about not enough description in the sex scenes...so I'm going to go out of my way on one of the chapters and be extremely descriptive, LOL. From one extreme to another!

Appreciate the feedback. As I mentioned in my profile updates this is mainly a diversion to get me out of the funk I was having stuck on Lapdancing 05, so hope it is a pleasant enough diversion for everybody else as well.

trphktrphkover 11 years ago
Good job

This is a fine piece of work.

As you said in your updates, this is more of a "stoke" piece than your other work.... and you are spot on in that decription.

Still there is enough build and psychology to be a good story

jviperjviperover 11 years ago
Not as good as your other works

Unfortunately this story doesn't feel as good as your previous ones. This one doesn't build anything to the sex and frankly the sex itself was not good. It feels like a mid-part story than anything else. We go to an orgy right out of the bat. Maybe the sequel will flesh out the set pieces and make the sex work better.

DocCISDocCISover 11 years agoAuthor
@Anon3

Sorry you thought it was something different. Had it been with actual little people, I would have put it in the fetish category, as that to me, would have been a particularly unusual thing. The entire premise of this story is what she would do for her husband to succeed in his job...

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