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Click here"I think this needs some special cleaning," I said, taking his dick in my hand.
"Yeah," he gasped.
I leaned forwarded and sucked him in. He moaned uncontrollably. I looked up at him, spread-eagled against the wall, quivering in ecstasy. Water beaded on his tan skin and his breathing was ragged. I worked my tongue up and down his shaft and then licked around his cock head before sucking him in all the way again. After only a few moments I stopped and stood up and kissed him.
"You like that?" I breathed.
"Oh god yes, incredible."
I knelt and resumed the sucking. He resumed his groaning. After a few more minutes of my oral ministrations he suddenly cried out.
"Oh my god, stop, I'm going to cum!"
I dug my nails into his ass and held him close as I pushed him off the edge of a screaming climax. He came really hard in my mouth, spurt after spurt, and I kept sucking him as he shrieked in the throes of his orgasm. The acoustics of the locker room shower really amplified the vocal effects, and I wondered if the walls had ever heard the moans of a man in ecstasy. Finally, he could take it no more and collapsed to the floor with a groan and lay there gasping, spread-eagled. I spat into the drain and then rinsed out my mouth before crawling over to his prone figure. I nestled into the crook of his neck.
"Was that good?"
"Oh, god yes," he replied, turning to kiss me. "You sucked my legs right out from underneath me."
"Oops, I think I spit them down the drain," I giggled.
"It was worth it."
We kissed for awhile before getting up and getting dressed. Closing up was going to have a different meaning for us from that night on!
The End
. . . and your continuing stories only shows your outstanding talent. I gave it Five Stars even though you never mention her fluffy, thick 2003 pubes.
The storyline has a lot of potential, and it's not hackneyed. But it is not developed enough. The physical contact in the showers could have progressed in gradual phases.
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I wish the author, who is technically competent, would try this storyline once more.
This story had a really great begining and build-up. Great back-story and development of character & situation. However the climax of the story could have been extended and used some development. The ending was to abrupt also.
Kept my attention the entire time! that was excellent! compelling from the beginning to the end