Halloween Noir

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Catherine and I got dressed again in silence. I gave her a hand mirror from my desk so that she might adjust her hair and makeup, as I quietly took the DVD out of my laptop and locked it in my safe for further study when I got the chance. Then I gave her a deep, sensual kiss and invited her to come by again for further consultations. I ushered her out of the office and as I returned to my room I passed by Destiny's desk. She caught my eye and said primly, "Yes, Mr. Baxter, I know, you pay me to keep my mouth shut."

The next day I called S************ and told him that the matter had been resolved. He dropped by the office. I didn't give him much of an explanation, and what I gave him was probably hard to believe, but there was no rational basis for any part of the tale. I told him that customer satisfaction was guaranteed, and he gave me another 4 hundred dollar bills.

Night was falling, and it was Halloween. The streets of Hollywood were full of people in costume. I went down to the bar at the corner and ordered an Irish whiskey. I was just starting to drink it when I got an excited call on my cell from Eddie. "Wherever you are, turn on Channel 5," he said. "They just started the weather report on the evening news, and you won't believe what is happening!"

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Down these mean streets a man must go who is not himself mean. . .

but apparently easily aroused. :)

Nice Chandler imitation, sexy, and as someone else said, funny. Made me want to take out the office bottle, polish a glass with a towel, and down a shot or two while watching the neon flash on and off on Sunset Boulevard.

Now I have to check out the other story you mentioned.

P.S.: There's that thing with the knickers again. ;)

legerdemerlegerdemeralmost 9 years ago
Definitely entertaining

You succeeded in summoning Chandler's ghost... I'd imagine he'd have approved, and perhaps joined in. Nicely done, a fun read.

AlwaysHungryAlwaysHungryover 13 years agoAuthor
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The style of this story was a tongue-in-cheek tribute to one of my favorite authors, Raymond Chandler. I apologize for the plea for votes. I guess it made me seem like too much of a politician.

AmitdankevinAmitdankevinover 13 years ago

That was a nice story including some laughs as well. I liked the plot and I also liked the way you narrated it. And, I liked the end very much as well.

And, one thing. When I read the first line, I had second thoughts about reading the story. You should not ask us to vote like that. Anyway, I gave it a good vote because it was nice.

Good luck for contest.

LonelyImpulseLonelyImpulseover 13 years ago
hmm anything, huh?

damn boy, you're selling yourself pretty cheap... first prize is only $150. So what's you're saying is you'll do anything for that? we need to talk...

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