"Yes, that's at least part of it." said Adele.
"There's more?" I asked. I knew she would only tell me as little as she could, partly to protect herself.
"Let me ask you this, Don." she said, turning onto her back and staring at the ceiling. "You're well aware of the things Cook is doing with his businesses, and profiteering from his Council position. But other Council members are going along very easily, don't you think? Why would that be?"
"Well," I said, "Reginald B.F. Lewis would get a big campaign contribution, funneled through T-Square. Malinda Adams gets support for her feminist causes, maybe a nice donation to Planned Parenthood. McGillie, Colby, and Schoen will have none of him, nor will Goldman and Steele. Pastor Westboro will get a nice ten percent tithe, and probably more, for First Baptist Church. Kelly Carnes? Hmmm, her husband is a wealthy dentist, and I'm not sure what her lodestone would be for working with Cook."
"Having said all that," I said, "obviously someone benefits further in this." I let my mind wander into the compartments of the Eightfold Fence...
*BRING!* *BRING!* *BRING!*
It was my Police cellphone, and Cindy on the line. "Commander, there's been a murder at Union Hall. The National Union President, one Jack Naples. He's dead, stabbed from behind..."
To be continued.
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Part 3 submitted
I submitted Part 3 when Part 2 was published last week. I have found that if I submit over weekdays, it takes 2 days to publish. But if the submission crosses over Sunday, it doesn't get published for several more days, and a couple of times I've had to re-submit to get it to publish. I don't know what the problem is with it not getting published if I submit over the weekend, but Part 3 was submitted, and it's still not in the hopper (the "pending" will become unclickable and it publishes the next day when it's 'in the hopper').more...
When will the next part be released?
Any timeline for part 3?
Wow - killing the national EMT Union President...
THAT is on hell of a cliffhanger!
This smells like it will be a 7 or 8+ -part sub-story in the overall story arc at this point... Though I do love how absolutely *EVERYONE* has their proverbial eyes on just how the Iron Crowbar will be reacting to things as they develop (kinda like all the international movers and shakers tend to ask the question "...but before we decide, where are the US Navy's Aircraft Carriers at right now?").
As always, WW, great handling of story, plot, and dialog. I always feel like I am right there watching and hearing the action take place.more...
Brilliant
Great stuff as ALWAYS, keep it coming and expect to see this dovetail with the CoC
Another thriller
keep em coming WW.
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