"Good girl." Dotan said. "After your glorious deed, you shall swear fealty to me, and enter the harem of my high priest. Then you will know what the true pleasure of being a woman is." The god grinned as wide as he could, showing off his pearly teeth. "Until then, the barrier stays in place. Now, go and find me the information I need."
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Can't wait for the next chapter!
Great story. Weirdly enough, there is surprisingly not much male dominant fantasy erotica on Literotica as you would think, but this was a great one. I can't wait to read the next chapter. You're a great writer.more...
Love this series
Please dont make us wait another month. Also, would love to see a female become a devoted follower from his mind melt power once he refines it further, rather than just insanely horn.
I am glad you are back writing the stories.
It stinks that other people were able to get you down, but I am enjoying this series very much. I am glad you're back here on The site giving us more good stories.
No, I got burned out on my previous stories. I got a review on a different site that infuriated me so much that it left a terrible taste in my mouth. Plus, I kind of hit a wall. I knew where I wanted the story to go, but couldn't seem to write myself there. Then, every time I thought about the story I remembered that review. It happens a lot with me, but I love this story (and it's great twists, a BIG one is coming next chapter).more...
Going back to read your previous series...
It was very enjoyable. Any chance of you continuing that one? I enjoy your writing style and the stories you create!
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