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"Pati?" "Relax, sweetheart. I want to show you something and this way you can't get away from me."
"I didn't like it the last time you tied me up!"
"Sure you did. You just didn't like the fact that I took all the control away from you. This time I'm going to show you that I still desire you without the drug's influence."
"Pati, I don't know what you are trying to prove. I love you. It doesn't matter."
"It does to me...so shut up and let me love you." She leaned down and grasped him by his cock.
"If you put it that way..." he gasped as she licked the head of it. She was obviously not fooling around. He gritted his teeth as he felt himself harden with a rush. Pati moaned happily as he hardened in front of her eyes.
"That's better..." she whispered before engulfing him in her mouth. He arched up against her. He was breathing raggedly by the time she released his straining erection.
"Pati, come here."
"Why?"
"I want to eat you. You've made me hungry. Now come and feed me." he coaxed.
"What a naughty boy you are." she scolded.
"Come here," he whispered as he used a spell to float her above him.
"That's not fair, Jonathan. No magic!"
"Not even when it allows me to do this?" he asked as he lowered her to his waiting mouth.
"I.... Ohhhhh!" Pati's head flew back as his tongue darted inside of her folds to find her clit. He growled at the spicy taste of his chosen. Damn, she tasted good. He ran his tongue down from her clit to her moist slit. Sinking his tongue deep inside of her, he lapped at her inner flesh.
"You taste wonderful," he growled as his magic released its' hold. He assumed that he had her hot enough to stay put. Now she was in position to let him eat to his heart's content. He growled when she lifted her womanhood off his mouth.
"Come back here," he growled deeply!
"No. I need to ride you." Pati scooted back and grasped him. Sliding him around her opening she sank down on him. "Oh yeah. This is it!"
"Son of a bit....." he argued as she started moving herself up and down. Tugging on the bindings, he was surprised when they slipped free. She must not have spoken the spell correctly.
Pati was surprised when she felt her husband's hands grasp her hips. Opening her eyes, she stared down at him in surprise. How had he gotten free?
"You've been a naughty little girl, Pati." he growled again before rolling her under him. Grasping her legs, he hoisted them over his shoulders and sank even deeper inside of her. He withdrew until just his tip was still inside of her.
"Jon...please!" she cried.
"I have a point to make to you, little girl. I love you. Drug or no drug, you are mine. I will always want you and know that you will do the same. We are Chosens and bonded and we are perfectly suited. Do you understand me?" he growled as he kept his eyes locked with hers.
"I, I..." she stammered.
"Say yes, dear!" he growled against her lips.
"Yes, dear." she said obediently. She moaned as he started thrusting inside of her welcoming body.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 6 years agoWhen you are doing dialogue, don't have two people speak in the same line.
"XXX","YYY" is bad grammar, and it is bad grammar because it is often quite confusing. Anything that causes your reader to have to pause to think about who is saying what is damaging to your story.
Past that, this is so much better than the first two chapters that I question if it is the same author. Perhaps you simply learned over time, whatever the cause of your increased skill, go back and re-write chapters 00 & 01.
J
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoand Spicy. Ahhhh yes, so tasty and so satisfying with very few calories. Lynn
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoI've read this story a few times, though it has been a while, and I just realized what is bugging me about it this time around: the dialogue. I love these characters, for the most part, but the dialogue just doesn't sound like people conversing. Should you publish this like the first part, Gracie and Rand's story, (and you should!) some dialogue editing would definitely be needed. Otherwise, its a very original and fascinating story, thus why I'm reading it again.
madam_noeover 16 years agoYour stories are sooooo good, they have me addicted, and I can't wait to see where this one heads. Charlie and Kate are classic opposites destined for a powerful love. Your characters are so realistic and well rounded you inspire me!
