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Staring up at the stars, she sighed. It was times like this that she missed her grandpa. She longed to be able to talk to him. She was at a cross roads. Now that she knew how to get around his self control, did she want to?
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 6 years agoYou had him go willingly into the water, knowing she was fine, for no other reason than to swim. Sure he made the lame comment about her dying, but she was obviously fine. All of this with the knowledge that he would get horny from the water.
If you don't acknowledge this rather pathetic attempt to subvert his own will it will seem like you have failed to understand your own plot device.
If you Do acknowledge that this was Charles' very pathetic move to overcome his own will, it makes him look weak and unable to set his own course.
Neither option is a good thing :/
J
Anonymousover 16 years agoI find myself checking several times a day, hoping that the next chapter has been uploaded!
Absolutely beatiful storyline, characters, and enough anticipation to keep me on my toes.
Don't ever stop writing, honey, you have a gift.
Anonymousover 16 years agoBut when will the net installment be out?? I know it takes a while to write, because I'm a writer myself, but I cant help but wish that the story would progress much more quickly?!!! You have me on tenterhooks all the time.
Zara
