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A few moments later, Arianna's voice came from the communications console.
"Good morning Clara. What good news do you have for me today?"
"It's about your son."
"What has he done now?" Clara could hear the longing in her friend's voice.
"He has managed to get himself engaged. How long has it been since you've spoken to him, dear Arianna?"
"It's been seven months since he has uttered a single word to me. I miss him."
"Well, that should soon change. Before long he will be under foot and making so many things difficult for everyone - that you will long for the time when he wasn't there."
"Never!" Arianna's voice was certain.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 6 years agoIt's getting a bit too involved. The individual stories are too thin to keep adding more - and then more still. Keeping track of multiple plots isn't the problem. The problem is that you're barely stitching the barest of outlines together for one person/group before you dart off to the next. Back down to four stars you go... I do hope you take time to flesh these out or it looks like you'll be half-assing half a dozen partially developed characters and plots.
J
Anonymousabout 14 years agoafter reading the comments, I'm glad that
I didn't stumble onto this story until now
because it "IS" finished and I don't have to
wait for each chapter to present itself...haha!!
Anonymousabout 16 years agoyour writing is wonderful and I just wanted to thank you for sharing.
dragontattoover 16 years agoAuthorI've had some emails and comments wondering where the next chapter of Healer's Touch is. And the good news is that I've just put the final touch on it and am sending it to my editor. You know, to catch them embarrassing typos...lol. Anyway, I will be submitting it as soon as I get it back.
