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((If you've enjoyed this, my second erotic story ever, please vote and comment. I love all sorts of constructive criticism, as it helps me hone my skills. I greatly look forward to hearing what you have to say.))
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- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 10 years agoThe only way this could get any better would be if it were actually in comic format.
Anonymousover 10 years agoGreat fun. Terrific dialogue. You obviously liked the interplay between Bastet and Maggie. I'm sure the goddess will make more appearances. At this point (end of part 2), I'm wondering about more details of Empire City and the rest of its denizens. I hope you keep up the good work NIG.
Anonymousabout 11 years agoGreat read. loved the humor and the erotic possiblities of your world. Was having a wonderfull time when she was being enroled by the goddess. Might have gotten better but all i could think of was furball when she was eating her out. sorry.. but that was what stuck in my mind, and coulnd't shake it. It was great for a laugh, and that is always good. grin... will be loving the humor or the erotica of your other additions.
NicoleAmyabout 11 years agoA very enjoyable story so far and I love the humour! Cant wait to read more :)
