Helping Mickey Ch. 01

bywakingDown©

"Come Suzie dear, let's take a walk, just out there upon the beach." He said, and kissed her again.

"Okay. Let's walk, then." She answered in a whisper, giving in.

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by Anonymous03/12/15

Finally, a story that has story.

And because it was so well written and had me questioning what on earth "white hallway" was, it gets a 5/5.

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by Anonymous01/04/15

It's beautiful

Please write more stories like this...

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by dmg4306/22/14

WOW!!

VERY well done. THANK YOU.
I really look forward to the next chapter.

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