"Come Suzie dear, let's take a walk, just out there upon the beach." He said, and kissed her again.
"Okay. Let's walk, then." She answered in a whisper, giving in.
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Finally, a story that has story.
And because it was so well written and had me questioning what on earth "white hallway" was, it gets a 5/5.
It's beautiful
Please write more stories like this...
WOW!!
VERY well done. THANK YOU.
I really look forward to the next chapter.
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