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Click here"Just let me go," he pleaded to her over and over.
Char's eyes began to fill as she heard the desperate plea. Her inner warmth filled her without a thought as she did just the opposite, she pulled him close to her and cuddled him like a mother with a child.
This is the craziest thing ever, I nearly peed myself when he was on the ledge because I could see the scene unfolding in my head.
I hate that her name is Charmel (I much prefer the 'Char' that she does not and find it far more professional than her given name) and I hate how she calls her friend, "baby girl" over and over again. Other than that, I love the story so far. Its so different from what I've read before.
I really love how you have gone into what both characters are deling with. I am glad you have done something original and I really hope at the end that Terry and Charmel end up happy. Make something bad happen to Henry and vante and the mother.
Fucking great! 5*****
Glad I found this late and no wait for Ch.2