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Click hereSheffield looked at her and smiled weakly.
"What?" she asked.
He snorted. "I don't think I've ever seen anyone as beautiful as you look right now."
- COMMENTS
chilleywilleyover 6 years agoWhat excellent writing. Well done characters and dialog, no suspensions of belief. How have I missed your work all these years?
Chilley
Anonymousover 18 years agoLoved the ending!! The timing and mood setting were a perfect set-up for the punch line. (no pun intended) I chuckled aloud.
I'm off now to read more of your submissions.
Keep up the good work.
Anonymousabout 19 years agoYou write really well, I'm off to read more of your stories. Good work!
