"It does," I replied as I grabbed her and pulled her into me, "it means you need to start wearing skirts. It will make doing this far easier," I said as I reached into her pants to feel her wetness, driving my finger into her as I devoured her mouth.
"For how long?'
"For as long as you can tolerate me."
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Sometimes I Don't Get It
Sometimes, this chapter included, I feel like this writer gets a good story line in his head, and then when he writes it out he leaves out enough of the details so as to confuse the reader. I kinda have an idea what's going on right now, but I'm not real sure how it got here, or where it's going.more...
Well, in a small nutshell
This blows. No character development, no introduction of characters or circumstances. Past history merely inferred without depth, requiring the reader to guess and muddle along through vague, trite dialog. You need a really top notch editor to clean your work up before going public. Not ready for Prime LE Publication.more...
This is one of the first chapters to make some sense.
You are going very slow and tedious, but at least I understood who these people are and what they are doing.
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One question though, where does Angie fit into this? Mothers can be really difficult for their families to keep on an even keel.
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I liked it...A good read...3*
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