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Click here"Now!" Heimdall called, and the whole of the group, two legged and four, stepped through as the wall of light appeared before each of them, swallowing the whole all at once.
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UsuallyPresentover 3 years agoAuthorI’m happy to hear you’re enjoying it - certainly been a pleasure & a pain in the butt to write!
Sorry I’ve taken this long to publish the next part of the tale, but I’ve had to rewrite chapter 64 three times now & still haven’t finished yet. Frustrating, but - it’s coming along, just a lot slower than I’d prefer.
beyondanyhelpover 3 years agoThis is such an amazing story. The mental imagery conjured by your writing is so vivid, and the verbal calisthenics in the dialogue are so engaging (had to read quite a few of them again to fully understand them, and I'm sure I will find more on a second reading), the final result is an experience that is utterly engrossing if not addictive.
I am so thankful to you, dear author for sharing your craft with us.
Special mention to the Anonymous person who recommended this gem among others in a comment elsewhere. You have my enduring gratitude, whoever you are.
UsuallyPresentover 3 years agoAuthorThank you for the kind words, @Ducatasti - I appreciate the appreciation.
Ducatastiover 3 years agoThanks for some inspired writing, I have just binged the entire 62 chapters! I find it fascinating and can't wait for the next installment. You truly are a gifted author. Thanks for sharing your art with us.
UsuallyPresentover 3 years agoAuthor@arroglass, @kyotie91 - Thanks! I'm very glad all you folks are into it - I'm having fun with writing it.
FYI, I'm partway (1/3? 1/2? something like that) into the next installment and working my way through as best I can. I doubt it'll be as quick to publish as this one was, but it SHOULD (*knock on wood*) go thru much faster than the one before that.
