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- God I love you my sweet sexwoman. Cum for me now darling, please. We're just passing a parked coach, and there are eyes on you, on what you're doing to your cunt...
She watched her own naked sex as it exploded. Liquid pulsed in the air and she keened the beauty of her completion. For her man. For herself.
*****
She drew the jeans up her legs, settled on the damp seat. Sandy reached back for a towel, and she folded it under her gratefully. Loch Lomond twinkled in afternoon sunlight, the mass of Ben Lomond dominating the opposite shore. Despite the beauty of the journey, her eyes fluttered closed, her man's voice murmuring of what they were passing. Memories of their enchanted island twined with the awful reality that soon they must part again. But her mind kept returning to Islay, to some of the most bewitching days she'd ever experienced...
She felt the touch of his hand on her thigh through jumbled half-dreams. The engine noise ceased. He was kissing her as she reached back upward into reality, a swimmer breaking through the surface after too long underwater.
- Welcome home, darling.
- COMMENTS
Sassylassy23almost 13 years agoI just adore your writing, keep it coming :). Keep me cumming :) If there's any way I can help, don't hesitate. You know where I am...
Incandescencealmost 13 years agoThis was a fantastic story. I think maybe even better than your earlier work. You should be writing novels for one of the publishing companies. This was really a well plotted, well written story.
deariemealmost 13 years agoI have spent hours reading all of your stories and MELANIE is my favorite. I love the characters and I very much hope that you keep writing and keep the stories coming. :)
viavaialmost 13 years agoBut wow! Who needs actual sex when I can just read your stories? Wait, I take that back, because all the batteries in the world can't...let me stop, too much info. But I really really love your writing. Please keep up the good work. You make a sex deprived college student's week.
Prof_Emmaalmost 13 years agoI love all your stories -- wonderful character development, great story lines about seemingly-real people I'd love to have as friends, terrific dialogue, all exceedingly well written -- but this one captivates me even more. Maybe it's the intensity of Sandy and Melanie's relationship, both emotionally and physically. Their delight in each other, and mutual sense of their great good fortune at having found each other, is wonderful to read. And the sex! The sex is just downright explosive.
I want to be Melanie. Oh wait, in many respects I am. Lucky me.
Thank you for writing and making your stories available to us. You write erotica for the literate and thinking person, for which I am exceedingly grateful.
