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Click here"Did you talk back to your mother?"
"We were arguing."
"I didn't ask you if you are arguing, I asked you if you talk back to your mother."
"Yes."
"Are you allowed to disrespect your mother?"
"No."
"Was she asking you to do something that would cause damage to your body?"
"No."
"Was she asking you to commit a crime?"
"No."
"You have two choices: 1. Pack a suitcase, and leave the house, within one hour, and I will give you $1000 to live on, until you get yourself a job. 2. I will cut your hair off, and you will be bald. The choice is yours."
Sharon fled the room, because she was beginning to cry.
Debbietugged on her father's sleeve, and with tears in her eyes asked, "Dad, please don't make her leave."
"Debbie, it's your sister's choice. She could have killed you, because she didn't think. Now, she has to make the decision."
Debbie approached her sister, who was crying, and in their own private telepathic communication said, "Danni, let him cut your hair. It will grow back. I couldn't stand to be without you. Who would I talk to? We have never been apart. If it will make you feel better, I will let him cut my hair off too."
Danni looked at Debbie and said, "You would do that for me?"
"I would do anything to keep us from being apart, sis."
Danni looked at her dad and said, "Debbie has given me the courage to go bald by offering to go bald with me. I won't let her do that. I will never talk back to mom in anger, again. I am sorry I put the household in such an uproar today. Most of all, I am sorry that I hurt my sister by playing a joke on her that put her life in danger. I guarantee you; I will not be doing anything that stupid again."
"Danni, I think you should go apologize to your mother, and tell her the same things you said in here. Remind her that someone needs to be shaved in a very private area. I'm going to get my movie camera and lights so we can record this event in living color, for future generations."
Simultaneously, Debbie and Danni yelled, "Dad, you wouldn't."
Evilly, Fred laughed, "Wanna bet?"
The End
Chapter 17
Honor Thy Mother and Thy Father.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 5 years agoI can't take anymore of this misogynistic clap trap. I tried to hang on through this story when I could see a ghost of a story line, but over and over the story collapsed into this rubbish. You say you've declined offers to have your work edited because the offers were from other writers, not editors. Most other writers recognize when to use then and than, something you failed to do more than a dozen times. The errors are so many, your story loses all continuity and readability. I'm done, and I won't be back.
Kayodeopokuover 8 years agoI don't get what P_D10's choice of sex themes to include in his stories has anything to do with you. You are reading the story and have actually gone as far s the 17th chapter at this point you should have a general idea as to what themes to expect in this story so if you are uncomfortable with said themes you could have stopped reading altogether or skipped the sex scene and tried to piece together any plot points you missed later. As to his diction again it is wholly within his rights to decide what to write, and these arguments between characters aren't new. If anything I could say that the character dynamics are what make his stories unique, much like a graffiti artist has a specific tag ge uses to identify their work.
Anonymousalmost 9 years agoEJust wondering hhmm. What is up with The bitch,bastard,god dammit SHIT?
Also The I HATE YOU,I'M GOING TO KILL YOU B.S.
You personally are an idiot for putting that shit in there including the incest!!
If you were a good writer you would use different appropriate grammar!
YOU SAY YOU ARE A PUBLISHED WRITER? BULLSHIT!!
