"Pensions?" I had remembered what had been written in Chloe's documentation from the other company.
Mr Mohan sighed.
"Yes. We have been told that we should be involved in workplace pensions. That will be sorted out and backdated. Your advice is expensive, Malcolm, but if we had listened to you earlier? We didn't. That's why I need to apologise to you. You were giving us good professional advice and we ignored it. We're sorry. We can't do much about you. We can for Chloe and the others."
"Thank you," I said. "I'll do my best to help Chloe."
"I know you will. And you probably will even after you've left us. If Chloe will sign to accept the contract I'll leave you two. I know you have better plans for this evening than talking to me. Chloe?"
I passed a pen to Chloe. She signed one copy of the contract offer without looking through it. She trusted the Mohans. She gave the signed copy to Mr Mohan.
"Thank you, Chloe. You'll get another email tonight about the temporary change of uniform."
We stood up. Chloe kissed Mr Mohan on the cheek.
"Thank you," she said.
"No, Chloe. I should thank you, and Malcolm."
He shook both our hands as he left. Once the door had shut behind him Chloe grabbed me and kissed me hard.
"Now we have the rest of the evening to ourselves," she said.
"Just the evening?" I queried.
"And Tuesday onwards, and..."
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That evening was the first of Malcolm and Chloe as friends and lovers. The next year was sometimes difficult at work but not away from it. We already knew each other as colleagues and friends. During that year we found ourselves as lovers. After six months we were engaged.
The End.
Yet another demonstraton
of how to do it properly.
It's a damned good tale and well-told.
Thank you
Great Story!
I found many things to be rather humorous; but, I realize that I am reading from the standpoint of an American "manager"! It makes very good sense to me from an employee relations and customer comfort - but also from the standpoint of the condition of the stock! And you added in most definite love story growing in the background! * * * * * !more...
Great story!
Thanks a God! An beautiful story. Really romantic. I liked.
Only one thing, is a little short, but a good to read and lovely.
Great Job!
5* for you!
5* of course
Very nice little story.
Thank you.
There is nothing wrong with the brief epilogue. This is not a story which should go on and on.
Everything has come together and an elegant ending tying it together was best.more...
Nice little story
But the ending was kind of tacked-on, rushed, and unsatisfying. It would actually have been better to leave off the final epilogue paragraph.
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