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Click hereCarlo kissed Paul's lips again and smoothed back his hair. "Not a thousand words, Paulito. Just three."
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Anonymousabout 16 years agoI think I clicked the wrong thing (100). I LOVED the story! It was wonderful! So well written -- tender, romantic, but still HOT !! Thanks -- Please post more!
innominatewriterabout 17 years agoYou have a marvelous way of building sexual tension. I really believed it when Paul said he'd wanted Carlo for years. Many people who writes stories throw romance in as an afterthought and it reads that way. This story is sexy, thorough and sweet. Nice job. I'll be looking at more of your work in the future.
Anonymousabout 17 years agoThis is a truly wonderful and well written story. Sometimes the way you put words together is so stunningly beautiful that I had to pause to enjoy the shiver of pleasure. The slow sensual exploration, coupled with the two men's unsure reactions was realistic and of course, the end made it all worth while. It was hot, but the emotions were lovely, the descriptions very beautiful and the slow unfolding exquisitely satisfying. Thank you for posting.
