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How a Rock Changed My Life


This is my first attempt at writing a story in this category. I don't know why but I've always enjoyed stories about mind control. Maybe its allowing yourself to wonder what you would do if you had all that power. Would you use it for good or for your own personal gain? You say that now but you would never know unless it happened to you. Let me know what you think. If it gets good feedback I might continue it. Don't forget to leave feedback. Thanks and enjoy.


I was driving to work like any other regular day when I looked up and in the distance I saw a steak in the sky. It was far away but it looked like it was coming right at me. I wasn't sure what it was at first. It was a streaking so fast and had a long smoky tail.

As it got closer I knew immediately that it was a meteorite or some other form of space debris. I couldn't tell how big it was but my first reaction was that I had to get out of there. In fact I had to warn the other driver around me to get moving too.

Apparently I was the first one to see it because when I jumped out of my car and started racing up and down the rows of cars urging them to get moving they all honked and shouted at me to get back in my car. Finally everyone started to get the picture as they looked up to where I was pointing.

Everyone panicked and started crashing into each other to get away. Finally traffic picked up and I raced back to my car. I could actually hear it whistling by the time I got back. As I jumped in my car I took one last look and realized I was too late!


The next thing I remember was lying in the middle of the ditch by the side of the road. Bits and pieces of my car lay all around me and what was left of my clothes was covered in orange dust and smoke.

I started to move to get up but fell back down with a pain in my head. I reached up and felt my head. When I pulled my hand away I saw a palm full of blood and more of the strange orange dust. That's when I lost conscious.

When I woke up I was in a hospital bed with tubes and wires coming out of my body. I tried to move and was immediately reminded of the pain in my head. I reached up and felt the bandages covering my bed. I couldn't remember how I got here nor had any idea how long I've been here.

I looked around for the button to call the nurse but I couldn't find one. I started to take in the rest of the room and noticed that this didn't look like your typical hospital. The walls were plain and gray, the windows where closed up and barred, and the door was one of those real heavy security doors.

I started to panic and shout out when I heard the door open and a cute young woman entered with a surprised look on her face.

I didn't expect you to be up so quick she said.

Who are you?

Where am I?

What's going on? I asked rather nervously.

Relax you've been in a very serious accident Mr. Parker.

You've been hit by a Meteorite!

You were flown here to the Jeffersonian as a precaution for care and treatment.

The Jeffersonian, I replied, why here?

Just a precaution due to the fact that you were exposed to fumes and dust from the meteorite and they were not sure if any kind of contamination or virus could possibly be carried in the rock and dust.

I was still very nervous about being in this strange environment and I think the nurse picked up on that. She crossed the room and sat down on the edge of the bed. She placed her hands on either side of my head and looked at me.

How are you feeling, she said.

My head hurts and I'm thirsty but other than that I feel fine.

She checked me over running all the standard tests and declared that everything seemed fine. She checked my bandages on my head and said she would be back to check on me shortly.

How long have I been here? I asked before she left.

The accident was yesterday morning; you've been here since then. She smiled and said it's really amazing you weren't hurt worse. Then she turned and walked out.

The next day I was feeling much better. The nurse, Tiffany came and checked on me every 30 minutes like clockwork sometimes staying for a quick chat or eating lunch with me. I enjoyed her company and it really helped pass the time.

I had all kinds of doctors and scientists coming and going all day long each not really saying much just writing things down on there clipboards and leaving. By the end of that second day Tiffany had told me that I would probably be released the next day due to the fact I was feeling much better and didn't have any side effects.

Side effects I laughed like what, Superpowers? We both laughed.

Well I'm not sure what there looking for but you have to agree it's kind of strange that you got hit by a meteorite and lived to talk about it.

I thought about what she said and remembered how my car was blown to pieces. I'm lucky to be alive.

Two days after waking up in the Jeffersonian each doctor and scientist I had seen the last couple of days declared me well enough to check out. Tiffany had been there to wheel me out to my family.

My mother Julie and three sisters Lindsey, Brenda, and Michelle were all there to meet me. My mother was visibly upset that the Jeffersonian would not allow any visitors in to see me because of the possible threat of contamination.

I said my goodbyes to Tiffany. I had hoped to ask her out and as I took her hand in mine she slid her phone number in my hand and kissed me on the cheek.

Call me sometime was all she said.

I'll do that as I smiled to myself while she walked away.

The ride back was a little weird. My mother kept asking me question after question.

Okay Nick, tell us what happened.

Why were you at the Jeffersonian?

Why wouldn't they let us see you?

How come nobody would answer our questions; and on and on.

I was glad to be out but didn't really feel like talking. I just wanted some real food and some much needed rest.

I wish they would just relax and give me a break.

Just as I thought it she stopped, right in mid sentence.

What am I thinking you just got out of the hospital and you need your rest. Well talk later.

I looked at each of my sisters and each in turn nodded there agreement and left me alone for the rest of the ride. I was grateful for the breather and enjoyed the rest of the ride home in silence.

Mom insisted on taking me back home with her to take care of me. I had my own apartment with 2 of my best friends Matt and Joe but she said it would make her feel better to have me home so I agreed.

Once we got home mom helped me up to my old room. It still looked the same even though I had moved out 5 years ago. Lindsey, Brenda, and Michelle followed mom closely into my room before she chased them off.

Let your brother get some rest. He'll talk when he's ready.

Thanks Mom, I know you all have a lot of questions but I just want to lie down and relax for a while okay.

I'll tell you all what happened later tonight during diner.

She kissed me on my cheek and smiled at me.

I'm just glad you're alright; we were all very worried about you.

I laughed to myself and thought you know she's right how many people do you know survive getting hit by a meteorite?

As she left the room I thought back on the last few days of my life. I was heading to work like any other day when I had seen the streaking light. I didn't have enough time to move my car before it hit. Apparently it completely destroyed my Volkswagen and amazingly threw me clear in the blast.

I had only minor injuries along with some mild head trauma. I had a small puncture wounds on each side of my head where the temple touches the hairline. That's what caused all the bleeding. And I was covered with all that strange orange dust from the meteorite.

My head was feeling better by the hour.

I was glad to be alive but kind of bummed about my poor car. Even though it was an old 1980 Rabbit diesel it was a great car and all I had. I didn't really have the money to get a new one and insurance wouldn't give me much for the old Junker.

I laid in bed wondering what to do until I fell asleep. When I woke it was dark outside.

I got up and headed downstairs.

When I got downstairs I saw my mom and Lindsey in the kitchen making diner.

Brenda and Michelle were in the family room watching TV.

When Brenda saw me she shouted out; look whose back from the dead.

Bout time you got up we were starting to get worried about you, how ya feelin?

Not bad little sis, in fact I feel better by the minute.

What's for supper it smells wonderful.

Moms making your favorite homemade stew with fresh baked corn bread and Mom's famous chunky peanut butter cookies for desert.

Mmmmm I can't wait I'm starving, the food at the Jeffersonian sucked.

Mom knows I lover her homemade stew and I was thinking about asking her to make some since she insisted on having me stay at the house. She also knows I love her peanut butter cookies heck everyone does but she knows there my personal favorite.

How long till diners' ready mom?

About another 15-20 minutes still.

Need any help?

No just relax Nick and let us take care of you.

Yeah big brother for Pete's sake you just got out of the hospital go and relax. Lindsey added.

I laughed and headed into the living room and crashed on the couch next to Brenda. Michelle was sitting on the loveseat across from us and we sat there watching some reality show on MTV. I hated these shows but my little sisters loved them.

Hey Brenda can I change the channel, there's a new UFC Ultimate fighter on tonight I was really hopping to catch.

A few seconds later Brenda tossed me the remote.

You can change it if you want Nick, I don't mind, do you Michelle?

No go ahead Nick; I've seen this one already.

I couldn't believe my luck. Everything was going my way lately. I passed it off as sympathy and flipped though the channels until I found what I was looking for.

Michelle never really got into my wrestling when I was in school and I knew they wouldn't want to watch this show but I thought what the heck, I'll play the sympathy card as long as I can.

I was hoping my sisters wouldn't mind letting me watch the show and as it came back from commercial. They didn't say anything so I kept it on.

I though that maybe they might start to even like it.

My sisters and I watched the last few minutes of the show including the fight at the end. They were starting to get into it like I had hoped and we were all cringing and cheering as the fighters pummeled each other.

We were all standing by the end of the fight when one of the fighters landed a great punch that knocked his opponent out.

We high fived each other and my sisters traded chest bumps. I couldn't help but laugh as I have never seen two girls give each other a chest bump.

My sisters laughed right along with me.

Michelle said what, girls can't give chest bumps why because we got tits?

She grabbed her tits and shook them. Brenda fell over laughing and Michelle jumped on her and pretended to ground and pound her like she had seen the fighters do on the show.

I pretended to do my best referee job and broke them up but found myself getting a little turned on watching them wrestle around laughing and pawing at each other.

Diners ready! Mom shouted from the next room

Michelle and Brenda jumped up and raced into the dining room, I followed close behind them and we all sat down to diner just like old times.

Diner was fantastic, I ate 3 big bowls of stew but made sure I saved room for a couple of mom's famous chunky peanut butter cookies. It was good being home again.

Over diner I told them about the meteorite and how it blew my car to pieces, my clothes, the orange dust, and the cuts on my head. They all told me I was a hero for trying to warn everyone about the meteorite instead of trying to get away myself.

Mom was especially happy to know I was safe after hearing what happened first hand and how my car was completely destroyed throwing me15-20 feet.

Mom came over and started hugging and kissing me telling me she didn't know what they would do without me.

Don't worry mom I'm okay, everything's fine the only real damage was done to my car.

She seemed instantly relieved. She dried her eyes and sat back down.

We'll see about getting you a car as soon as you're up for it.

We are a close family but it was a little hard growing up as the only man in the house. My dad had died in a car accident when I was 10. Mom was only 33 and was widowed with 4 children. Lindsey was 8, Brenda 7, and Michelle was 5.

I had moved out right after high school to go to college but Lindsey and Brenda stayed home and went to community college.

Michelle will be graduating high school in just a few months. She's planning on staying home and go to the same school as Lindsey and Brenda.

Now 13 years after dad had died my 43 year old mom still looked good. She had plenty of men chasing after her but never really dated after dad died. She just put all of her efforts into raising us.

Mom and Dad both loved sports and always made it to all our sporting events. When dad died Mom still made it to all of our home games and attended away games whenever possible.

She always insisted that we all go to college and she worked very hard to support us. Along with the insurance money we lived a good life.

My sisters had grown up into beautiful young ladies. They had plenty of guys chasing after them but nothing seriously that I knew of.

Lindsey turned 21 a couple of weeks ago and Matt, Joe and I took her out to the bar. We had a blast but she ended up having too much to drink and I had to drive her home. She passed out on the way so I had to carry her up to bed. When I laid her down she let out a soft moan and wrapped her arms around my neck.

Before I knew what she was doing we kissed.

I'm not talking any old peck on the lips. I'm talking about tongue and everything. I quickly pulled away and she just softly moaned and just rolled over.

I couldn't believe it but I knew she was drunk and I'm sure she thought I was somebody else. She never brought it up so we never talked about it.

I have to admit, the kiss was hot!

As I finished the last bite of my third chunky peanut butter cookie I asked to be excused from the table. I helped clear some of the dishes while Michelle and Brenda did the dishes. Mom, Lindsey and I went and sat down in the living room. We had had a late supper, it was already eleven o'clock.

I was not very tired but I could tell everyone else was. I caught everyone yawning except Brenda. Brenda didn't have any early classes so she liked to stay up late. She loves watching late night T.V.

Listen everyone its getting pretty late, I didn't want to keep you up. Don't worry I'm fine. In fact I'm felling much better just being at home.

You should probably head for bed.


They all strangely agreed simultaneously.

Then Mom said: You sure you're okay Nick? You really gave us a scare and that place had us going nuts.

I'm fine Mom go ahead and go to bed I'll see you in the morning.

Everyone got up to go to bed smiling and nodding except Brenda.

She had a sad look on her face like she was upset or disappointed.

What's the matter Brenda?

Nothing, I'm going to be she said as she slouched off.

You can stay up if you want. When I said that she instantly looked happier.

Okay, I really wanted to stay up but you've been through a lot. I wanted to make you happy and do what you asked us to do.

It sounded a little weird the way she said she wanted to do what I wanted. I was ask her about it when Mom came over and gave me a goodnight kiss.

I'm just so glad you're alright. Goodnight Nick.

Then Lindsey and Michelle each came over and gave me a big hug and kiss on the cheek.

Yeah big brother I don't know what we would have done without ya Lindsey said.

Michelle hugged me the tightest. As the youngest I've always been a little over protective of Michelle and we've always had a special bond.

Brenda gave mom a goodnight kiss and Lindsey, Michelle, and Mom all went to bed.

I looked over at Brenda who was absently flipping through the channels. I thought about what she said and how she said it. I wanted to do what you asked us to do was what she said wasn't it?

I thought back to earlier that day how everything had been going my way. Diner, the TV show, cookies!

It had to all be some kind of weird coincidence right. First the car ride, my favorite meal, Brenda tossing me the remote, that never happens. Then I suggested that everyone go to bed and they all go, even Brenda was going before I stopped her. She had that disappointed look on her face like she didn't want to but was going anyways.

While I was thinking out of the corner of my eye Brenda turned and smiled at me.

This is so stupid, I said in my head.

I wish I had the remote, I thought; like I was doing Telepathy.

She looked down at the remote picked it up and tossed it to me.

Here you can have the remote, change it if you want.

Holy Shit! I can't believe it, did that really happen?

No way, no way it could still be a coincidence I thought. So I thought of something a little more specific next.

Brenda get up and stretch for me I thought. Sending it out like I was saying it but in my head and to my self.

Sure enough Brenda got up from the loveseat and started stretching, arching her back and raising her arms above her head. I could see all her curves. She leaned over and spread her legs shoulder width apart and leaned down to one leg. She had her back to me and I had a great view of her firm ass. I couldn't help but look; she was a very firm and attractive girl.

Brenda had dirty blonde hair that was shoulder length but usually it was back in a ponytail. She was tall and lanky with long legs and arms. She was about 5'9 and who knows how heavy, she'd never tell me and I never cared to ask. Now seemed like a good time to ask.

Brenda, how much do you weigh?

About 120 last time I checked she quickly admitted as she switched and leaned to her other leg.

Her body was toned and athletic having played basketball, volleyball, and soccer all her life. She quit playing after high school but still gets together with her friends and plays every now and then.

She had Mom's darker skin tone and tanned easily. I was more like dad and had a pale white complexion, I didn't mind though I was very muscular from years of football and wrestling. I wrestled all four years in college and was pretty good too, a 3x All-American.

As I watched her finish stretching her athletic body I noticed that I was starting to get hard.

I hadn't gotten laid in a while and never had a chance to rub one off at the hospital even though the nurse Tiffany was pretty hot.

I started to think of what other things I could make her do. I needed to test this further.

Brenda, take your bra off under your shirt. This time I said it out loud.

Brenda pulled her arms into her shirt and twisting and turning she pulled her bra out of her shirt. That's better she said, it was digging into my arm.

Did she just justify taking it off? Did she think of her own reason for doing it? That was interesting.

Brenda did you take your bra off because I asked you to?

Yeah, but it was digging into my side anyways, you don't' mind do you big brother?

She arched her back one more time and I got a nice look at her tits as her tight shirt hugged her body. Wow she looked great.

I was very hard by now and getting hornier by the minute. I needed to test some more, what else could I do?

Could I make her forget things?

Could I make her do things she didn't want to do?

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