How It Started

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Note: This is my first attempt at a story so please any constructive critisim is welcome and appreciated. This is intended to be the first in a series so long as people enjoy it enough. Enjoy!

How it All Started:

I know I shouldn't be here. I should not have traveled all this way to see you. We've talked online, sure but this, this is something totally different. I don't have much to lose and it's this intense desire that made me buy the ticket and the hotel room out here. Sure I told everyone I was going on a business trip but really I was coming to see you. Just out of college and already trying to have an affair with you. You were married right out of school a year before me and even that time that you came to visit and we fooled around doesn't compare to what we're about to do.

I'm nervous, shaking with the excitement of seeing you, having you. I pour myself a drink, whiskey, your favorite. I down it quickly. I brought the bottle to share with you but I figure you wouldn't mind if I smelt of whiskey. I start thinking back to your visit to college two years back, how hot it had been, how its been in and out of my mind ever since.

We hadn't seen each other in almost a year. In the meantime you had gotten married and I had simply been enjoying my senior year. I was just happy to be hanging out with you again, tossing back a few drinks. I had no idea how drunk we were getting. You were staying with your former roommate and we spent most of the night talking, until her boyfriend called and we were left alone in her apartment.

That's when the real talking started.

"We totally would have dated if I were single. It would have been great." You had said.

"Probably." I wasn't sure how to answer. Then I started thinking about it. How similar our interests were, and how attractive you were. It was a fair statement, we probably would have dated. "We would have at least fooled around." I managed to say, my drunkenness taking over my better judgment.

"At the very least. God it would be so hot." You lay down on the bed.

"How many women have you been with?"

"Six or so."

"God, I bet you're great." I attributed all of this to the liquor, how drunk you were but the look in your eye told the story. You wanted me but I was too stupid to notice. Deep in the blue of your eyes I can see it now in my memory. We kept drinking. We kept talking about sex. You got drunker and we started talking more and more about how good sex between us would be.

"I'd love to have you touch me. To feel your skin on mine," You said as you got up to go to the bathroom. I thanked God for the moment of solitude. What was I doing, you were married and I wasn't about to cross that line. Was I? There are a few things I didn't think I was capable of.

You retuned with your jeans off and crawled into bed and got under the blankets. You may have been too drunk to notice me. I waited for you to speak and thought at first you had passed out. I was about to get the rest of my beer and start walking back to my apartment that was only a few hundred feet down the road when I heard you breathing deeply. I was worried at first that you were going to be sick but then I noticed the way you were moving. I thought I was imagining it. You couldn't really? But you were. You were touching yourself under the blanket.

I should have left. I should have done the right thing. You had hit a nerve though a fetish of mine. There is nothing I like more than to watch a woman masturbate. The voyeurism, that taboo of it all and you a friend, a married woman turned me on beyond description. I sat back down and watched; maybe you were doing it in your sleep. You kicked off the blankets and I could see for sure what you were doing. Your hand was in your panties fingering yourself furiously. More than that your eyes were open staring right at me. This time I did not fail to notice the desire in that deep blue.

You got more and more into yourself but your eyes never left mine. I could feel my cock growing in my pants, getting harder and harder with every motion of your hand in and out of your pussy and over your clit. It begged to be let out of my faded blue jeans. And then you half fell half threw yourself out of the bed. I went beside you to see if you were ok but you just kept going looking at me.

"I want to touch you," I said. I don't even remember thinking it first.

"Don't. You can't," you responded but your yes begged me for a touch. I didn't respond to your eyes though, I just sat and watched. You took my hand put on your stomach. I moved up and cupped your breasts, playing with your nipples, pinching them, pulling them. You liked it the rougher I got. You used your free hand to force my hand down to your pussy. I had never felt a pussy so wet before in my life, and I had never been so hard.

I continued to finger you while you played with your clit. And I kissed you; the soft feeling of your lips was exquisite. My tongue probed your mouth and your in turn probed mine. You pushed me away.

"I can't, we can't, God this feels so good." I sat back up against the wall. You continued to get yourself off.

"If you're going to do that I'm going to do the same."

"Don't" But I couldn't. I unzipped my pants and started to stroke myself watching you. I watched as you came, moaning and driving me wild with each sound you made. You calmed down and came over to me.

"Your cock is wonderful. It's so big." You reached out and took it in your hand. Your touch was light and wonderful.

"Yes," I said to you.

"I want to taste you." You put me in your mouth. Your lips and mouth were softer than your touch, warm and wet. You slowly started to suck. It was rapture. You moved everything the right way. Deeper and deeper in to your throat you took me until you had it all. You gagged but only a little and came up and went right back down.

"I'm not used to how big you are."

"You're amazing," was all I could muster before my dick disappeared down your throat again. This time you went fast, urging me with each motion to cum. I could feel my orgasm building as you played with my balls.

"I'm going to cum." I said unsure how you would respond. Three more fast strokes and then you held me in your throat as I came. I had never cum that hard before, or that much and you took it all. Swallowed every last drop of my cum. You didn't stop there either. You didn't take my dick out of your mouth until it was soft.

The rest of the week you took care of me, and I ate you out but we couldn't fuck. We wanted to but you simply wouldn't cross that line. I understood. I knew how much you had to lose. How much you have to lose.

That was how this started. That was what got me here to this hotel room. I don't even know if you'll show up. I know you want to. Our conversations online you've told me how much you want to fuck me, you've told me what a dirty girl you are. How you want me to fill your pussy with my cum, how you want to get on top of me and force me to eat you, how you want me to teach you about anal sex, you want me to make you love it, how you want me to dominate you, how you want to make me your sex toy, and even how you want to have me with another woman.

So here I am drinking my fourth whiskey. And there is a knock at the door.

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7 Comments
AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Exactly, as...

soon as I saw that it was written in the second person I left!

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichalmost 16 years ago
It's a good start for a good story line

This being your first story,and you want to travel down this shakey road of writing,just write what feels good to you.I think you will figure out who is trying to help with your writing,and use those comments to improve your ability.

I enjoyed reading what you have,and hope that you continue with this story line.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
good story

keep it going

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Second Person POV Is NEVER Correct

It takes a writer with great skill to make that work, and none of the ones who can do it post on this website. Try reworking this using 3rd person and you'll fare much better. Check out some texts on proper punctuation and your story will flow much better, and your sentences/paragraphs will mean what you actually want them to convey. Finally, find a fresh approach to "the problem" and you'll really become someone readers like.

TalenhawkTalenhawkalmost 16 years ago
2nd person view SUCKS

There has never ever been a good story posted on this site in the 2nd person point of view. If you disagree I challenge anyone to post a story that is currently listed in the top 100 in any category. Stop using that perspective!

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