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Writers Note: I just wanted to say a quick Thank You to everyone who has given me feedback since I started writing and apologise profusely for the delay in posting any new stories. Please believe that the feedback I received is a big part of the reason I started writing again.
- COMMENTS
sensuousOkietopalmost 2 years agoVery well written. You really put the literary in literotica. i was particularly impressed with the references you used and your sense of metaphor. Again, really well done.
Haphaestion2004over 9 years agoI read your story twice. I admit the first time I just gobbled it up and I know I didn't pay attention to some details.
Of course, Matt's mum is one of those women that really make your toes curl and you can't help but resent; she judges, she demands without speaking (just by looking), she really is one of those frustrated bitches that live their lives through their children's. I don't really know that she loves Matt much, he's such a disappointement to her ! He visits but she has his room rarely aired and smelling musty - but keeps an old spiderman suit because it reminds her of the time she was in control of his life, she tries to inspire compassion and wallows in self-pity, crying when she knows her son is listening. Shit ! What a hag !
Really, the man in Matt's dream is a purge for the time he has to stay at his mother's house - he hasn't seen this guy in 7 years because of a fight he had with him, all because of his dear old mum, I'm sure.
Matt decides to invite Simon to his cousin's wedding - so I think he decided to follow his dream and tell his mum to go suck an egg ...
dinkybootsalmost 12 years agodissapointing ending.? o and if people dont like it when i bitch. they can go f--- them selfs.?
Anonymousover 13 years agoJust a sweet story and glad he didn't let his mother's feelings sway his heart.
