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- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 1 year agoI dislike the weak and frail female character, also the domineering macho, didn’t like it. And the sex scenes where meh
Purplefizzabout 2 years agoI know this isn’t a new story and it’s unlikely the author even looks at the comments here, but, that was too abrupt an end, it just falls off a cliff as far as storytelling goes. It needed an engagement party to quell the sideways looks and silent disapproval, it needed a joint wedding between the Brothers Harker and the Sisters Parkinson, it needed cousin Roberts nose rubbed in it, it needed Izzy to return to the house & Mrs Coats as the fit and proper Lady of that house, but most of all it needed an Epilogue! Gah! Why don’t you writers get that we read these stories in part for that happy ever after? When you write a romance story, do you think it’s too cliched to do that small thing for us? Yours disapprovingly, Ppfzz.
Anonymousalmost 3 years agoI loved it, but where was the triumphant return, where everyone celebrates? Where was the happy ever after?
Anonymousalmost 4 years agoThe story reminded me of the Betty Neels novels I love so much. They have nothing more that hard kisses in them, and I wondered what her stories would be like brought into the modern times. Thank you for letting me experience that with this story,
