- NonHuman
- Hunted Ch. 03
- Page 3
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William still drinks from her hungrily, unable to stop, knowing full well that she is dying. He grabs the side of her head to spread her neck further, to get the blood to flow faster as it begins to slow, Monica almost drained completely.
Monica stares up into nothingness, towards the ceiling. Waves of pleasure still rolling through her intensely. She feels so weak, and yet so strong at the same time. She feels so cold, and yet so warm. She can feel as Belle's blood moves into her bloodstream, the warmth slowly spreading from her heart.
Darkness invades her vision, and she knows that she is about to slip into a temporary state of death...
"Oh, Monica, I love you," William whispers into her ear as the darkness crawls across her vision from every angle.
"Oh William I..." she cannot finish the words as the darkness takes her and she slips away...
...Slips away into her new life.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 10 years agoWas really enjoying this story until the third chapter.
What the hell was that?! Would of enjoyed it more if these characters had been mentioned in the first two, however, all of a sudden it a totally different story with people I have NO idea are?! Totally lost me here.
MizTabout 13 years agoI just found you story today and read all 3 chapters. I can't wait for chapter 4 and the continuation of this story. I am very impressed to find that this is your first Lit submission. I think you must have some sort of background in either literature or english because this does not read like a first time author. I wish you continued success and again I look forward tio the next chapter.
Mtannerabout 13 years agoThis truely is a wonderful story so far and I can't wait to see it continue.
