Finally, after my parents had come in to offer me lunch, and after my mom had brought me dinner; after they had turned out the lights and gone to bed, I began to write.
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I hate writing speechs!
well I suppose that the only thing I like to write are letters.. But the alternative game is played out in a lot of do-over stories. Since I am happy with my family and friends I do not worry about doing anything different from what I did do.more...
Really good series
I am really enjoying this series of stories. Very well done. Good writing. Good plot. The opening was crackerjack. I can't wait to see how you tie it all together. I only wish my high school nerdiness had turned out this well!more...
I have not commented until now
but I have to put something down after this chapter. It is truly a 5 star effort, the writing crackles, the tension high, the possiblities as to who his wife is, and who the oldest daughter's mom is, is still not very clear.
The emotion you evoke, as we all put ourselves in highschool again, is truly awesome.
Thx for your efforts and hope no one bothers me the rest of the day so I can finish this. I only found you when you posted in loving wives, the only category I tgo to. So glad I did. And when are you going to post more of the other story?more...
A good story line.
Gee, a guy who was a real jerk in GRADE school changes over the years and actually becomes a decent guy later on, and someone finds that hard to believe? As for him becoming one of Jack's closest guy friends, read the story. Jack has spent most of his time hanging around the 4 girls and had little regular contact with other guys outside of school. I don't find anything remotely unreasonable that he comes friends with the guy.more...
lmao
soo am guessing everything was perfect when you were 18
am guessing you were never confused about anything
am guessing you never made errors of judgement
never got mixed up in , or lost in your choices of direction or friendships.
Recap.
Jack had no real social circle before hooking up with Beth & Co.
by hooking up with Beth & co. he loses touch with the few old friends that he had.
The Asswipe / Bully character , is the only other guy that has a long term involvement
with the group ( even if it is an on/off .. on/off .. sporadic one ..
soooooo does it really take a genius to work out , Who/which guy Jack is going to be Friends with , at least until he branches out and gets to know more people socialy .
Context ... something the Author has tried previously to explain ..
&
you sir/madam ... take one or two sentances from everything previously written & lose all sense of Context ..
xxxhugsxxxmore...
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