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Click here"I'm sorry. I should have come sooner," Said the soothing familiar voice who keep apologizing repeatedly.
"Florence?" Erin tried to mutter that name but nothing seems to come out.
Florence wrap a blanket around Erin and lift her in her arm like a baby.
"You crazy bitch. You should be locked up in a nut house," yelled another familiar woman's voice.
Erin realized that there are a few other women, but she's too tired to make out those faces. Only Florence that she manage to recognized.
"You are safe, honey. She will never hurt you anymore. I will protect you," said Florence softly and kissed her on the forehead.
- COMMENTS
luvinasianabout 9 years agoIt's a good story and you've built the story up a bit. I've read worse stories from other authors that didn't build any type of plot or characters and went straight to sex. Keep up the good work and at least you acknowledge that you can still improve. Can't wait for the 2nd part of the story!
angelraine89about 9 years agoAuthorFirst of all, thank you for reading my story. At least I know that someone out there actually spend their time to read what I wrote.
I'm new here. Still don't know how to use this site, to find an editor or whatever. English is not my language. So, I just type what sounds 'right' to me. I have trouble to convey my idea, to find the right word sometime. Even I feel confused with my own sentences once in a while. Sorry for some grammatical errors.
This is my first story. I will try my best in the future and improve my English.
Thanks again.
blackash01about 9 years agoGood story but I hope you bring some more and please get an editor it is hard to read and understand the story
fins73about 9 years agoNot a bad story idea, but you really need to find an editor. :) Good luck with future stories.
