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"It means everyone around me must die," she said.
She yanked the knife out and raised it again for another stab. Blood and a string of flesh dripped off it.
"I told you you didn't want to be with me tonight," she said.
Her arm brought the knife down again.
"I told you..."
And again.
"But you wouldn't listen..."
And again.
"You wouldn't listen..."
And again...
- COMMENTS
angelx602almost 15 years agoGreat story I could definitely see this as a full fledged movie.
Ravishingover 15 years agoThankgod halloween isn't for months; the chills I have now are bad enough. I enjoyed the thrill of this so much, I read it out to my Fiance. Whom, enjoyed it also. Thumbs up, on a wonderful piece. More's the pity I wasn't back on Lit enough to vote on this in 2007.
Anonymousover 16 years agoA totally creepy story. I loved how you showed how much in love the two characters were and then the twist ending just ruins it all. So good.
