I'll Be Home for Summer Vacation

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"I'd love that," Jess agreed weakly, having lost her voice.

The distance was too great; their hands separated. Tabitha blew Jess a kiss as she climbed into the car.

"Next semester. Sophomore year!" Tabitha called out.

Jess nodded.

And then Tabitha was gone.

****

Tabitha's tears blurred the road. Kate offered a tissue; it didn't last long.

They rode together in deafening silence. It allowed Tabitha to reflect on what had happened the previous night, and that morning, when Jess got to try out Kate for real.

As much as the memories turned her on and made her want to dip into her waistband, it also confused Tabitha. Kate had offered her a way out; Tabitha hadn't taken it. She wondered if Kate was having second thoughts and regrets. That worry turned to guilt.

It was one thing to watch a blood-related family finger, ride and eat each other to orgasmic heaven. It was entirely different when she was fucking her own sister. What if heeding Adrian's warning had been the better choice? What if this would cause strife Tabitha hadn't prepared herself for?

"In point-three miles. Turn left," the female GPS voice squawked.

"Tabs?" Kate said.

"Mmm?"

"I can't wait."

"Huh?"

Tabitha turned glanced away from the road. Kate was staring straight ahead. She took a deep breath and squirmed in the seat.

"I have to have you again," Kate clarified. "I won't be able to hold out for the whole trip."

With that, all the worry and guilt drained away.

"Hey Kate, you ever been fucked in a gas station bathroom?" Tabitha asked.

Kate's eyes were closed. "Yes."

The answer floored Tabitha, who did her best to keep a straight face. "First station we see, I'm pulling over."

Kate broke out in a smile. "I just hope it's not too filthy."

****

Harry watched the car pull away as he took a swig of beer. For the first time in a while, he smiled. Genuinely.

To his amazement, the conversation with Tabitha had changed something within him. He'd been holding back hurt feelings and angry words for years; once he'd vented, the rest sorted itself out.

He loved Brenda too much to leave her, despite what she was doing with Allison, despite what she got up to with Adrian and Jess. He had a love for his wife that transcended this bizarre situation, a love that was unconditional.

And he loved Allison too. Allison had always been a wild one, a weight on his aging heart even before she and her mother resumed that strange family tradition. But Harry wouldn't change her at all if he could.

But there was one thing Harry would need to do, he decided, something that would complete the therapy process, clear his head and allow him to move forward with his marriage still intact.

Harry was going to take a vacation. He'd be gone only long enough to get the space he needed.

As Harry finished his beer, he planned and pondered. He'd read that Colorado was a nice getaway during the winter, and that the Rocky were beautiful any time.

Hell, he'd even rent a motorcycle and tear up on the road, just like the old days; better yet, he'd buy one.

When he returned, the family situation wouldn't change; Harry knew that. All the same, things would be different from within himself, and that was all that mattered.

I would like to thank 'alwayswantedto' for helping me find something significant to do with Uncle Harry. I appreciate it. And as Harry rides off into the sunset for his enlightenment and happy ending, he thanks you as well!

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MfkndragonMfkndragon10 months ago

Seemed to start you was trying to bring tabby and the other girl together then you flip flopped it like they didn't mean nothing to each other back to meaning something at the end which was it and why did you allow the family sex to happen so easily and tabby be perfectly fine with so much so that she wanted her on sister it doesn't make since with the start of the story how you made out like she was in love with the other girl who she went home with

MayorReynoldsMayorReynoldsover 9 years agoAuthor
Koriander,

I actually submitted the third episode, "I'll Be Home For Thanksgiving," for approval this past midnight! I finished the first draft early this year but the print copy sat in my desk for months afterward. I just recently pulled it out, dusted it off and completed it, and that was after I debated whether to throw it away and move on. So it's interesting—and encouraging—that you posted this comment less than 8 hours later!

I appreciate the nice feedback and constructive criticism. I agree this one's on the toy heavy side. I try to rest the synonym resource area of my brain by adding variety to the sex acts but sometimes I overdo it a bit. The next episode has lots of toys as well (including Kate's silver vibrator and a new RealisticCock thrown in) but hopefully there's an equal helping of fingers, tongues and themes to add balance.

Again, thank you for the feedback. Episode 3 is awaiting approval and I'm hoping it will be live in a few days. In the meantime I'll be sure to read over your series! Sapphic incest is best.

KorianderKorianderover 9 years ago
Enjoyable read - but too toy heavy

MayorReynolds,

I read and enjoyed both episodes of this series and would look forward to a third part - if you ever decide to write it.

Your stories are certainly well written, the balance between realism and fantasy is right and your characters seem sufficiently realistic.

The only thing that really bugged me in this episode was the repetitive use of toys. I'm not completely turned off by toys - however, I felt you overdid it a little.

In the second half of this episode, the women nearly instantly go for toys whenever the action starts. This especially made the last scene seem unrealistic. It was the very first time between Tabitha and Kate - and they instantly grab the toys after foreplay...

Nonetheless, this was enjoyable and totally worth reading. I know it's been over a year - but here's still hoping you'll publish a third episode.

Hugs,

Koriander

MayorReynoldsMayorReynoldsover 10 years agoAuthor
Uncle Harry

My original idea for Uncle Harry was that he would be the "everyman" in this situation. He is supposed to represent how a person '"in real life" would react if he discovered his family or his neighbor's family was into rampant incest, which is to say, probably flabbergasted and/or grossed out.

In other words, I wanted to have this whole orgasmic saga of sapphic incest, but drop in a dose of reality at the same time. Cake, eating it.

In retrospect, it was a bad idea. I like playing with "realty" and real-life implications and consequences, but when I was writing this installment all I ended up with was this poor guy who's caught in the middle of a scenario where his wife is fucking his daughter, her sister, and her niece. IMO, it didn't give me the edge I wanted; it just made things depressing.

I asked for advice on the forum about how to fix this blunder without retconning Uncle Harry out of the story. Some sage words gave me an epiphany, and I felt like I ushered out Uncle Harry the best way I could. His "therapy" session with Tabitha leads to Tabitha realizing feelings about her own sister, which will kick off the lesbian family love fest in installment # 3. Then I ended "Summer Vacation" with Uncle Harry deciding to take a trip to clear out the rest of his mind and reach enlightenment.

As for Uncle Harry joining in...probably not. At this point I think this is the last we'll see of him. When Thanksgiving rolls around he'll be off on his motorcycle adventure. It's no so much that I'm squeamish about him joining in; he's just become a problem character for me and I can work better if he's somewhere else for the final installment. Rest assured, though: Uncle Harry lives, and he'll come home happy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
More more and more

I too would like a sequel to this. I feel kinda sorry for uncle Harry though... Missing out on all the fun. Maybe he could join Brenda and Allison, or all the girls in the family at some point? Kinda as a reward for being one of te few males in the family who ever stuck around through all of this. Like a living, breathing Willy Wollop lol

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