In The Night Garden Pt. 04

Job? Is that you?

"Oh COME ON!"
"What does the guy in the $6,000 (Hugo Boss) suit have to do to get a blow job around here?"
Definitely Job from Arrested Development.

Awesome

Firstly since the first instalment this has been amazing, a good build up, solid pace and very good descriptively. This is a reallistic story that could happen to anyone.......
If I'm going to criticize, it will be the last instalment (part4) the son of a tycoon was stretching it a little, but even then you saved it.
Now I don't want you to rush the next installment/s, but HURRY up!! Seriously I can't wait! Xxxmore...

I agree with the others. I hope this story will lean more toward reluctance than non-consent. Something about Tom slowly having to seduce her and wear her down sounds so incredibly hot. I also really love the level of detail you include. Just the right amount to provide the reader a visual but not too much for us to get bored with it. Can't wait for more!more...

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Again thank you, I really appreciate the feedback! I'm almost done with part 5 but a girls gotta get her beauty sleep for her real boring job in the morning, I'll finish it up tomorrow evening so hopefully it won't take too long to get approved. I wish I could do this full time it's so much more fun than my actual job!

Kisses xxxmore...

Please continue!

I've really enjoyed the story so far so I can't wait for the next part. I'd like to see more reluctance from Eva, though and maybe a little bit more depth to her internal discourse and emotions. Keep going!more...