"Do you like that baby?" He panted, "I could fuck you all night, are you gonna come for me now?" He took his face away from her breast and dragged her down slightly to meet him as he hungrily kissed her on the mouth, letting out a load moan as he quickened his thrusts, pushing himself as far into her as he could.
"I'm coming baby!" He breathed as she writhed beneath him, her eyes squeezed shut.
"Look at me," he demanded, "I want to see your eyes when you come for me."
She reluctantly opened them, her lips slightly parted as she accommodated his movements, the heat and the orgasm building up inside her ready to explode. He pinned her arms above her head and looked into her eyes; and with a few last long thrusts she felt his hot seed shoot into her. He kissed her softly on the neck as she breathlessly jolted beneath him, her pussy walls contracting around his cock.
After a couple of minutes of holding her there, he rolled off to lay on his side beside her, his hand moving down towards the soaking wet smoothness between her legs, stroking along the outside gently as she lay on her back exhausted and helpless. He leant down to kiss her slowly, she could tell he wanted more. She took a deep breath and got up, wrapping herself in a sheet to sit at the side of the bed.
"You're not up for round 2 I take it?" He asked, sitting himself up to kneel behind her as he massaged her shoulders. She shrugged him off as she stood up, her legs still a little shaky.
"I have to go," she whispered, the words hardly making a sound.
He kissed her on the back of her shoulder as he leant back down on the bed and watched as she got dressed and tidied herself up, looking as immaculate as she did when she'd first entered the room.
"Fine, you can go now. But Eva?" He quickly said as she went to open the door.
"I'll see you tonight."
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Hi guys thanks for your comments!
Like I said I welcome criticism as well as praise so I'm not disagreeing with anything anyone had said here. Thank you all for reading.
I'm not going to go into it but as I was writing the last 2 parts back in the summer I was going through a bad time, but writing my stories was keeping my mind off of things but as I said my heart wasn't really in it. I'm sorry if some of you feel let down by where my story has gone but after reading through it again for the first time in a long time I've got some ideas of where I wanna go with this so hopefully I might manage to change some of your minds. If not oh well, you can't please them all!
Also, at this point in the story Freddie's character isn't a vital part. I've always planned to bring him in and give him a voice but first of all I was attempting to establish the relationship everyone's interested in which is Eva and Tom.
I'll be writing the next part soon (sorry to keep you all waiting) but in the meantime I've been working in some American Horror Story fan fiction so feel free to give my first post a look? I know I should've finished this story first but the tv series inspired me and I felt compelled to write!
Peace xmore...
Well, I for one would like to see the next chapter.
Some comments have been quite rude, but don't let those jerks stop you from seeing this story through. Sure, there's room for improvement (always is), and there's still plenty of room in the story to flesh other character aspects.
Tom's character has taken a turn into the dark side. Turns out he's an asshole, a spoiled brat asshole lol...or is there more to him? Eva is just this side of a ninny, which, paired with Tom's domineering sexuality, made for some rather hot sex in the beginning (don't get me wrong, this chap. was hot too), but now having seen the depth of Tom's obsession with her, I'd like to see her turn the tables on him, gain some self-confidence.
Hope to see more!
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Please come back!
I loved this story so much and I'm really sad that you haven't updated in a while. This is sincerely one of my favorite stories and I hope you come back soon!
I like it!
Very nice story...just go on with it :-)
Part 6?!?
I am loving this story so far! I was wondering whee part 6 was? Sorry if I seem pushy but this story has become one of my favorites and I find myself constantly rereading all 5 parts.
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